till now this fanfiction is really satisfactory and above this is overlord. ... thank you author for this amazing fanfiction. ... .. .. ...

I started reading this work now, and i can proudly say this project has lots of potential. I like character development + Interegated into world. Tensura + Overlord = Fantastic🤘😝🤘 Keep up the good work, Thank you.

▪︎ Writing Quality.............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Story Development......☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Character Design.........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5star, but for the sake of 5 stars, I will give 5 stars ▪︎ World Background.......☆☆☆☆☆ - finally a challenge. welldone.

. . . . . . . . I don't have words to describe how much of a fairy tale it is. Unique skill predator, 2 peoples have it and then our overlord why is his character so meak in this. I can't comprehend it with my small brain. Buko's personality is to disgusting for my own preference. Shaltiar is not calling him My lord anymore. He is so weak that his bones gets crushed when someone holds his hands and no sorry whatsoever even after that. OG rimuru had more op cheats than momonga in the series. Predator was main skill of rimuru which allowed him to grow till how strong he is. And here every slime has one they say. Donno what to feel. it feels like buku is the main protagonist sometime, and momonga is a supporting character. Buku has predator but doesn't want to use it she is not asking permission from momonga and doing things on her own accord. If you have read original over lord novel this will seem as an children's book to you. Anyway it is my own opinion, if author wants to remove it it's his own opinion, if you want to ignore it it's your own opinion.

To be honest, from the start it was very uninteresting, the proof, I think, is that someone else who went to the world of isekai, you know, is actually the protagonist of the overlord story itself, it would be nice if the mC was someone else with the ability of dungeon votive + his subordinates who went to another world , so that mc can surprise his opponent who doesn't know about some of the items from the Yggdrasil game itself, well before that I'm sorry author, I really don't like this novel, it's just like, like you love Mc overlord's own shoes instead of making your own story, this is like the original overlord story template but in another anime world, plus the tensura mc anime is removed again,. then how can you make an interesting story? while you yourself have eliminated some of the good plots in that world?.. it would be nice if you used your brain before writing,.. grade 04 for this novel, thank you

I read Overlord novels over 7 volumes. And well, after I read this fanfic, I find it unfortunate that the MC is the Overlord MC himself and not a transmigrator who knows the plot or something. It's not that I don't like Ainz, it's just meh. It's boring, I don't like this kind of MC.

This is a genuine 5 star novel, One of the best webnovel fanfic section can offer each interaction is soo well done that it does not even feel like you are reading a fanfic.

one of the good fanfic, there is an enemy that is equal or can be considered a threat to nazarick. which made Momonga have to be extra careful than the original, and made me wonder if Nazarick could still be in control of the whole situation. Google Translate

I’ve read this in ff up until 168 and i can confidently say it is one of the best fanfic ever written. It’s world building and deviation from canon are all done great.