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Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv42yr
2022-09-10 23:56

This story is one of the good ones from the Pokemon fandom. The character development is good, the plot is a lil slow, world building is pretty neat. Except some minor errors the story can be read easily without disturbing the immersion. Some of the things that kept bugging me: - Sinking of SS Anne wasn't Hisako's fault. So he should have been compensated. - While trying to become gym leader of Dark city, the undercover Nurse Joy hated him. Why? MC did the league work, he saved the town. So why the cold shoulder? - I didn't fully understand about league citizenship. What I mean is, since Hisako has become the gym leader shouldn't he be eligible by default? - MC openly sharing the process of Rhydon evolution with Blaine. Also while Feebas was evolving he was careless. Koga's relatives could have seen the secret and MC would have been trouble, because the evolution process was a secret. Even with these nitpicks I truly enjoyed reading this story. The path of gym leader alongside being a hunter is a first for me and you, author have done an amazing job so far. Keep up the good work Rating 4/5

Pokemon Hunter

Skye12_
4.6
190 Chs

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Sirione
SirioneLv5

about the part of feebas evolution if you haven't noticed... kirlia you put them to sleep before they can see the process.

2yr
Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv4

What I meant was he could have ousted them sooner. They all knew that the girls were spies acting on their own to help Koga. If he kicked them out earlier is what I meant. It's just a small nitpicking that I didn't like😅

Sirione:about the part of feebas evolution if you haven't noticed... kirlia you put them to sleep before they can see the process.
2yr
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Yamir781
Yamir781Lv1

I come from having bad experiences with, pokemon blood ties, and pokemon alex burns, as well as others, so please.... please don't disappoint me, do you know how difficult it is to find a good pokemon fic???

2yr

Deepsea
DeepseaLv6

One question only before i read further, is there pokephilia or any romance between pokemon and human?

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joaos
joaosLv5

Suggestion: when developing the events of the story, avoid abusing the armor of the plot, as it makes it artificial and uninteresting. The journey and character development is sometimes more important than the goal itself. As an example of Sneasel's capture, the act was similar to Chinese novels in which the MC inherits some cultivation technique from the "primordial demon god", a series of coincidences that led to its acquisition.

2yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

This story is about trans "women" working at a pokemon beauty salon. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....

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Laura_King_7157
Laura_King_7157Lv1

Work is fine so far, hence the 3/5 ratings. Hisoka seems an interesting protagonist, if a bit cliché. The plot seems interesting enough that I'll continue to follow, but this story is a bit rough around the edges. Work could seriously use an editor. Author can't seem to decide if the work wants to be in past tense or present tense, which isn't confusing but is distracting. The paragraph spacing also leaves a lot to be desired; traditionally, during a conversation, paragraphs would be used to denote a change in the speaker, in order to help the audience better follow the conversation. Overall, this story is interesting and fine, but with an editor, it could become actively very good in a short period of time. I look forward to then.

2yr
Cleiton_Sena_6677
Cleiton_Sena_6677Lv1

Honestly, this story even had potential at the beginning but seriously after he found Ash's group, the MC seems almost like another person relating very easily to people in an almost forced way, taking rhydon for me was a bad choice and even things that happen afterwards somehow leaves a forming taste in my mouth.

2yr
DaoistwwYBDC
DaoistwwYBDCLv1

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Dark_Wiz
Dark_WizLv4

It was quite good in the beginning but content quality went on degrading as story progressed. Ending is weird and unsatisfactory (in my opinion).

2yr
Doist_Snow
Doist_SnowLv1

This is better than other pokemon fics, I read not gonna lie at first when I saw that the cover is gardevior, I already expected some mess up chapter but it's not.

2yr
Jims_Rid
Jims_RidLv4

Story is good but it's just that the MC is a bit too lucky in his journeys. Well, perks of being a reincarnation with pokemon knowledge yeah. However, he hasn't suffered any notable defeats yet. While he's actually a strong and tactical trainer, it sounds too unrealistic to always win, considering that even champions have losing records.

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