Item: The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line
Rating: 5
Author: icingquinyang2

icingquinyang2Lv151yr

2023-01-17 23:10

author you stayed true to the romance and kept the lead couple strong. this is one of the better ones I've read so far. will definitely read your next. the relationship wasn't filled with too much angst save for one when the ML got into trouble for not communicating. but all else including the love scenes were tastefully done.

The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line

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