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huahua
huahuaLv142yr
2022-03-21 06:32

This story has a very similar idea to another on trial rn. However, I could not continue this novel after ch4 (dropped the similar one on trial too, haha, maybe this plot is not my cup of tea). At the beginning, the story starts with her biological mother ordering her to marry vegetable ML in order to get the money for medical fees of the mother who raised her. Then, after the talk, she leaves immediately with the butler of ML's family. I was confused, but ok. Then the butler shows her what to do to care for ML, and leaves, so the same day/minute that she got married, she had to take care of ML, including wiping him down with medicine. And then FL sees that ML has a muscled chest. Author, please... That dude has been in coma for years. What muscles? Has logical thinking left the chat? Then, when night falls, FL goes to sleep. Guess where? Right. In ML's bed. That man is in a coma, just WHY/HOW are you sleeping on a bed with him? He should be on a hospital/medical bed to make care easier, and even if he isn't, sleeping on a bed with him is just weird. A la. Moving on, FL gets woken up in the middle of the night. ML's younger brother is there, drunk, and ready to ra*e her. She fights him off, and she accidentally falls on ML during the fight. Then accidentally kisses ML. ML wakes up, sees his younger brother trying to ra*e someone, and is annoyed. Not about the ra*e, because he thinks she is 'just a servant', but about the fact that this is happening in his bed. And so I dropped it. Stupid and weak FL, callous ML, bstard brother-in-law, and overall weird development of events. This is not it for me.

The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line

Misty
4.1
120 Chs

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Vee_97
Vee_97Lv12

thank you for rounding it up, i was contemplating to read it before 😂 we got so many similar plot even between the same week trial read. if it's not about ex husband chasing wife, real family pushing fl to marry crippled/coma/sick man with refined muscle, medical genius transmigration... all which is not really my cup of tea

2yr
15
Mani_Pateria
Mani_PateriaLv14

can't agree more. . .what a pathetic fl

2yr
4
Itola
ItolaLv14

Agreed . I came here for the strong female lead tag only to get a weak and crying fl that was about to let a scum r*pe her. I understand that the guy could be stronger than her and she can't resist, which to me means she is not a stong fl lead. Stong fl lead kick a**. If they are weak physically they are strong mentally, I see nothing looking like a strong female lead in this one

2yr
6
BreBee
BreBeeLv4

After reading such a review, the Thomas in me had to go confirm before believing. 😂😂😂😂Story line is so rusheddddd that after reading the whole thing I can't say much about it. FL has no character, even the Ruthless ML doesn't have a character design. ML father and FL parents are both Delulu

2mth
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TackcaT
TackcaTLv13

very few spots where he/she were wrong so that's a plus. my only negative comment is that there are only 21 chapters!!! please please please get this book released!!!

2yr

thakarriddhi11
thakarriddhi11Lv14

Can't wait to read more. hope it gets picked [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
trick_or_treat
trick_or_treatLv6

Raw? Any spoilers? Is this worth reading? …….. So she "sold" herself in a way to save her adopted mom‘s life… and the fake daughter, the adopted mom‘s blood related daughter I assume, did nothing? 🤔 Spoiled to the core huh 🙄 And her thinking that the mc took everything (the ml) from her tsk tsk tsk aren’t you talking abt yourself 🙄🙄🙄 No idea if I want to read it *sigh* Maybe there are funny scenes that may move me, funny grandparents are the best lol

2yr
Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Review until Chapter 40: Translation quality needs TONS of improvement. This book loses track of gender pronouns and even the characters’ names. Latest one would be Grandma Chen. She was mentioned then poof she turned into Mother Chen. Also, Mother Chen (Yilan) likes her daughter-in-law Qingqing a lot and yet asked her to call her (Yilan) AUNT. Should it not be MOTHER? FL Qingqing is not a complete pushover or weak. She just have a big weakness, her adoptive mother. ML is good. He was not portrayed like “Voilà, I’m hale and hearty now that I can run a marathon.” His recuperation is slow. There should be therapists to teach his wife and guide him back to mobility. 3 years of being a vegetable… and no mention of nutrient infusions. There are a lot of inconsistencies that need to be edited or corrected. But it is still a good read so far, just not a must read for me.

2yr
X_X_I
X_X_ILv4

This is based on 40 chapters. Let me first say that I saw the word mob in the title & got excited thinking we were getting a mob story. (I mean I guess we could later on but it doesn't seem so.) As the synopsis says, FL is treated like trash by her family & is basically forced to take the place of her adopted sister to marry a comatose ML. ML wakes up & now her family wants the adopted sister to replace her in marriage. They continue to treat her like trash & ML does help her, though he's not clear with his intentions towards her so she assumes he just wants her as a caretaker. This isn't the worst story but it's kind of weak compared to other similar stories. So, while I guess it's an okay read it's not a story you'd miss out on f you didn't read it.

2yr
Lady_Comet
Lady_CometLv15

Translation and/or editing issues a plenty. Story wise it's an easy read if you can ignore the translation issues. The characters are a little flat but it's good for a one day read.

11mth
Jean_Fere
Jean_FereLv4

This was just rather bad. The villains were evil without any point and stupidly self destructive as well. The protagonists were dull, empty, and in general lacking awareness of any sort. Can't call the unfolding of the story a plot, just a lifting of incidents that are pretty much clichés. What irks most is that this one got picked up when so many better ones did not

1yr
Tena2811
Tena2811Lv15

The writing quality was a little bad at first, it look like the author was getting the characters mixed up. The story development and character design was impressive. I loved it! An all around good storyline.

1yr
zaidhy
zaidhyLv14

nicely written but a bit hurried. love the plots twists and turns. excillaratunglt refreshing story line. 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍

2yr
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