Item: The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line
Rating: 3.4
Author: huahua

huahuaLv142yr

2022-03-21 06:32

This story has a very similar idea to another on trial rn. However, I could not continue this novel after ch4 (dropped the similar one on trial too, haha, maybe this plot is not my cup of tea). At the beginning, the story starts with her biological mother ordering her to marry vegetable ML in order to get the money for medical fees of the mother who raised her. Then, after the talk, she leaves immediately with the butler of ML's family. I was confused, but ok. Then the butler shows her what to do to care for ML, and leaves, so the same day/minute that she got married, she had to take care of ML, including wiping him down with medicine. And then FL sees that ML has a muscled chest. Author, please... That dude has been in coma for years. What muscles? Has logical thinking left the chat? Then, when night falls, FL goes to sleep. Guess where? Right. In ML's bed. That man is in a coma, just WHY/HOW are you sleeping on a bed with him? He should be on a hospital/medical bed to make care easier, and even if he isn't, sleeping on a bed with him is just weird. A la. Moving on, FL gets woken up in the middle of the night. ML's younger brother is there, drunk, and ready to ra*e her. She fights him off, and she accidentally falls on ML during the fight. Then accidentally kisses ML. ML wakes up, sees his younger brother trying to ra*e someone, and is annoyed. Not about the ra*e, because he thinks she is 'just a servant', but about the fact that this is happening in his bed. And so I dropped it. Stupid and weak FL, callous ML, bstard brother-in-law, and overall weird development of events. This is not it for me.

The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line

Misty

4.1

120 Chs

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Replies4

Vee_97Lv12

thank you for rounding it up, i was contemplating to read it before 😂 we got so many similar plot even between the same week trial read. if it's not about ex husband chasing wife, real family pushing fl to marry crippled/coma/sick man with refined muscle, medical genius transmigration... all which is not really my cup of tea

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Mani_PateriaLv14

can't agree more. . .what a pathetic fl

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ItolaLv14

Agreed . I came here for the strong female lead tag only to get a weak and crying fl that was about to let a scum r*pe her. I understand that the guy could be stronger than her and she can't resist, which to me means she is not a stong fl lead. Stong fl lead kick a**. If they are weak physically they are strong mentally, I see nothing looking like a strong female lead in this one

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BreBeeLv4

After reading such a review, the Thomas in me had to go confirm before believing. 😂😂😂😂Story line is so rusheddddd that after reading the whole thing I can't say much about it. FL has no character, even the Ruthless ML doesn't have a character design. ML father and FL parents are both Delulu

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