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X_X_ILv42yr
2022-03-22 13:50

This is based on 40 chapters. Let me first say that I saw the word mob in the title & got excited thinking we were getting a mob story. (I mean I guess we could later on but it doesn't seem so.) As the synopsis says, FL is treated like trash by her family & is basically forced to take the place of her adopted sister to marry a comatose ML. ML wakes up & now her family wants the adopted sister to replace her in marriage. They continue to treat her like trash & ML does help her, though he's not clear with his intentions towards her so she assumes he just wants her as a caretaker. This isn't the worst story but it's kind of weak compared to other similar stories. So, while I guess it's an okay read it's not a story you'd miss out on f you didn't read it.

The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line

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huahua
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Reveal spoiler

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TackcaT
TackcaTLv13

very few spots where he/she were wrong so that's a plus. my only negative comment is that there are only 21 chapters!!! please please please get this book released!!!

2yr
thakarriddhi11
thakarriddhi11Lv14

Can't wait to read more. hope it gets picked [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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trick_or_treat
trick_or_treatLv6

Raw? Any spoilers? Is this worth reading? …….. So she "sold" herself in a way to save her adopted mom‘s life… and the fake daughter, the adopted mom‘s blood related daughter I assume, did nothing? 🤔 Spoiled to the core huh 🙄 And her thinking that the mc took everything (the ml) from her tsk tsk tsk aren’t you talking abt yourself 🙄🙄🙄 No idea if I want to read it *sigh* Maybe there are funny scenes that may move me, funny grandparents are the best lol

2yr
Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Review until Chapter 40: Translation quality needs TONS of improvement. This book loses track of gender pronouns and even the characters’ names. Latest one would be Grandma Chen. She was mentioned then poof she turned into Mother Chen. Also, Mother Chen (Yilan) likes her daughter-in-law Qingqing a lot and yet asked her to call her (Yilan) AUNT. Should it not be MOTHER? FL Qingqing is not a complete pushover or weak. She just have a big weakness, her adoptive mother. ML is good. He was not portrayed like “Voilà, I’m hale and hearty now that I can run a marathon.” His recuperation is slow. There should be therapists to teach his wife and guide him back to mobility. 3 years of being a vegetable… and no mention of nutrient infusions. There are a lot of inconsistencies that need to be edited or corrected. But it is still a good read so far, just not a must read for me.

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Lady_Comet
Lady_CometLv15

Translation and/or editing issues a plenty. Story wise it's an easy read if you can ignore the translation issues. The characters are a little flat but it's good for a one day read.

1yr
Jean_Fere
Jean_FereLv4

This was just rather bad. The villains were evil without any point and stupidly self destructive as well. The protagonists were dull, empty, and in general lacking awareness of any sort. Can't call the unfolding of the story a plot, just a lifting of incidents that are pretty much clichés. What irks most is that this one got picked up when so many better ones did not

1yr
Tena2811
Tena2811Lv15

The writing quality was a little bad at first, it look like the author was getting the characters mixed up. The story development and character design was impressive. I loved it! An all around good storyline.

1yr
zaidhy
zaidhyLv14

nicely written but a bit hurried. love the plots twists and turns. excillaratunglt refreshing story line. 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍

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