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It could have been good. But it is wasted due to author inserting his own wish fulfilment in every chapter. It's as if he is checking tick boxes of clichés at the start Waifu- check Systems check OP ability- check For a guy who spent five years in Suna, it sure looks like he just transmigrated into the 5 year Chiaki and started comparing everything to Konoha. How can a child of less than 5, convince his Jounin father to travel to Ame(basically foreign country), bring back an orphan(Konan) to Suna and convince him to unofficially adopt her? This was just to give a waifu.
Naruto: Overhaul
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Also about how Konan was adoptep, I remember it was something bout Chisaki going with his Father to Ame and then they met Konan and he then persuaded his Father to adopt her. Parents are suckers for kids, so Chisaki convincing his Father to adopt her isnt really that unrealistic. Also like you know, its not like something bad is gonna happen if he does adopt her. Also having a daughter might be pretty cool and shes gonna keep Chisaki company is what his Father might have thought.
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Convincing his father to adopt her is fine if she was on the streets in his country but across the world? Don't defend this. This ff is complete bs from start to current and the author is just doing wish fulfillment to the max. As Uncle Roger says "All flavor, no sustenance"
Venniksu:Also about how Konan was adoptep, I remember it was something bout Chisaki going with his Father to Ame and then they met Konan and he then persuaded his Father to adopt her. Parents are suckers for kids, so Chisaki convincing his Father to adopt her isnt really that unrealistic. Also like you know, its not like something bad is gonna happen if he does adopt her. Also having a daughter might be pretty cool and shes gonna keep Chisaki company is what his Father might have thought.
Venniksu:Also about how Konan was adoptep, I remember it was something bout Chisaki going with his Father to Ame and then they met Konan and he then persuaded his Father to adopt her. Parents are suckers for kids, so Chisaki convincing his Father to adopt her isnt really that unrealistic. Also like you know, its not like something bad is gonna happen if he does adopt her. Also having a daughter might be pretty cool and shes gonna keep Chisaki company is what his Father might have thought.