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Primordial1dCommentedThe fabled magic core! There would be a mental realm as well. Then mind defence will be building defences around the mind. People should petition JKR to make this canon since the fandom already believes this
As they turned 11, the volatile magic within the child's body would experience a mutation, a change that would calm it down, thus congregating to form a stable core. This allowed magic to be probably anchored within the body, and to be accessed more easily through will, and more resistant to emotions.- Primordial1dReplied to Aukima_3246
Yeah? And Naruto is wearing a fake mask but is a mastermind
During this time, he made it clear to himself that nothing would stop him from becoming an ideal shinobi. Not the abrupt end to the Third War. Not the new clanless hokage. Not a giant fox dancing atop the village's Southend. Not even the death of said clanless hokage could stop him. - Primordial4dCommentedCh 63 Chapter 62 Sharp Tongue
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I feel like both version worked almost the same. But Minato was better at executions the technique. Like if Tobirama took 1 sec to activate it, Minato took 0.1 sec. Furthermore there is evidence of Minato improving it to teleport to near the mark and not exactly to the mark. He called it version 2 while fighting Obito during the kyuubi attack Another important change was that Minato was able to mark his Kunais with the seal while Tobirama needs to physically mark it by at. This allowed Minato to preprep the battlefield.
I want to hear your thoughts on it to avoid any possible plot hole. - Primordial9dReplied to king_of_kings666With a playful smile, he turned his head to the leaning Nagini and kissed her crown, which made her open her eyes in shock and froze. "Thank you."
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Gender change.
Akihara Kagura was somewhat dissatisfied in her heart. - Primordial25dCommented
Just a general rant. So don’t be offended or anything since it’s a Chinese story anyways. This story is forced beyond the point now. There is no reason that it should follow canon. There is no reason that fights follow the same pattern. There is no reason why Sasuke would follow Orochimaru or why Orochimaru needs sasuke only. There is also no reason why Orochimaru would attack Konoha with Minato present. 🙂
Ch 191 Chapter 191: Chidori. - Primordial1mthCommented
The fabled magic core appears! The source of magic. The reserve! Nobody knows where it came from. Definitely not from canon
The magic core inside every witch or wizard acts as a reservoir for magical energy, which they use to cast spells or draw upon the ambient magical energy around them. When this reserve is depleted, they experience magical exhaustion and must rest to replenish their energy before casting more spells. Moreover, the magical channels or veins that run throughout a wizard's body are crucial for distributing magic to where it's needed for casting, whether through a wand or directly from the hands for wandless magic. - Primordial2mthReplied to AllFather_Ch 141 Chapter 141: The New Victim.
- Primordial3mthCommented
This is so genuinely childish that I love it
'Heh…' For some reason I felt smug about that fact... that's right, crane your neck up to look at me plebians. - Primordial3mthPosted
I have read every fanfic in Ao3(filtering is horrible there), FanFiction.Net and WebNovel on Naruto. Some I loved, others I dropped on chapter 1. I rarely rate 5 stars since most novels are shit. So I fully reserve the right to judge this novel :P This is potentially 4.7 stars and can be full 5 stars if the chapter frequency or chapter size improves. The story progresses naturally and without leaps of logic or character assassinations. No cliches like Evil Hiruzen or like. Story is good and dialogues flow very naturally. It might become my top 3 Naruto fanfic if continued. There are some typos but nothing major. The only issue might be the short chapters and update frequency. The only potential issue might be how you develop the obvious cheats because it will become very wish fulfillment if not handled properly. I won’t go into detail as it’s very early. My recommendation would be to either shift to less frequency but longer chapters or high frequency but same length chapters. I will recommend the former as it gives time for you to think better and removes the pressure of releasing brain dead chapters to fulfill your obligations of chapter. In both cases, a fixed schedule is key. It’s better to stockpile some chapters to release even if you didn’t write the next one, you could maintain the schedule
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Dirty minds of the author… 😂😂
Pause. - Primordial3mthReplied to Dominic_Zibuda
I don’t think so. In fact I think it was natural. Chakra is not specific to Naruto. Avatar has that. So does Yu Yu Hakusho. Chakra is also called Ki so add dbz. Plus it’s more abnormal to think that you reincarnated into an anime immediately and I hate that in most fanfics
Fiction, however, was something that I always loved and never grew tired of. The beauty in the stories made me feel like my life was a part of those characters hidden in the words I read, I was not just me, a boy stuck on a bed, rather I was a connoisseur of experiences! I ran with Naruto, sailed with Luffy and swang from building to building with Spider-Man, it made me feel like I was so much more. In retrospect, that makes me sound so fucking pretentious and weird haha, but in the situation I was in, I was weird enough, why not be happy and weird instead? - Primordial3mthReplied to 7rox
It’s Hokage. Hiruzen Sarutobi turned traitor and joined Iwa because he was till not free of the paperwork
So in Land of Earth, the only one who can pose a danger to Kakashi should be the Third Hokage. - Primordial3mthCommented
Jiraiya then asked Jiraiya to sit. Jiraiya was confused because it was the first time Jiraiya has asked him to sit. But Jiraiya was adamant
In the Hokage office, Jiraiya listened to the news from Jiraiya with a serious face. - Primordial4mthCommented
I think it is more like you can defeat anybody in a short while. It’s like, you are a level 1. 8th gate can boost you up to level 100. Now it doesn’t matter if your opponent is level 10 or level 99. You would trash them all the same
After all, not everyone can be like Guy who almost killed Madara who had reached the level of the Sage of Six Paths. By comparison, Might Duy, who opened the Gate of Death, was only able to kill four out of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist. - Primordial4mthCommented
so he also has a sharingan??? you get a sharingan, you get a sharingan Everybody gets a sharingan !!!
The air crackled with anticipation as the two boys locked eyes, their Sharingans activated and ready to analyze every move. - Primordial4mthCommented
Meanwhile, Madara be like
It was interesting to learn that the majority of the clans that joined Konoha did so out of request from the Uchiha clan and not the Senju Clan. This was shocking as one would have assumed with Madara's vengeful nature and Hashirama's benevolent nature, it would be the other way around. - Primordial4mthCommented
Didn’t she say she had yet to awaken hers?
Miwa used her Sharingan to read Renjiro's intentions. She swiftly activated her own ninjutsu, releasing a burst of wind from her hands to counter his attack. The two attacks collided, creating a swirling vortex that disrupted the courtyard's tranquillity.