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2024-11-23 20:49

really nice start expect the whole filling thing what killed this story for me was chapter-58-first-kill like it came out of a blue he is not a calculated killer nor was he tormented to have the idea of killing a school mate that fast without reason and the stupidity of killing someone in an advance society and not even knowing his background feel forced to create a cold blooded hero without context

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I'm about 600 chapters deep and I have enjoyed it so far however there are glaring issues that I'm finding harder to ignore. My biggest issues: 1. Antagonist motivation/logic 2. Utilization of gravity magic So far conflict is summarized like this: Does MC exist? Yes. Then he deserves death... I get antagonist need to exist but it just doesn't make sense sometimes. His own side is trying to kill him for merely existing and everyone else criticizes MC for literally just existing. There are other talented people but no one goes after them. MC's biggest mistake is just existing. There are other more talented people but NO ONE attacks them. I realize it's because of MC is the MC but it's pretty hard to keep reading when literally everyone (including his own side) is trying to kill him. Fights (especially for the first 200 chapters) are summed up with: "Gravity Field". No nuance and intelligence behind MC. I'm all for OP MC's but it would be cool to see him fight and utilize his power in creative ways but it's literally just spam a move and win (which is fine occasionally but why give him other spells if he isn't going to ever use them or find a use for them like gravity push or pull). Fights could be so much more interesting. For example if he fought hand to hand and during the fight uses gravity push to alter the direction of the opponents punch. Or literally anything other than spamming the same move for 200 chapters. Later it gets replaced with another spam move. That being said, I have enjoyed this as a brain rot type of story. I just wish there was more character motivation. Why does his own side want to kill him? Why does literally everyone hate him for just existing when there are other characters in the story who are supposedly more talented? Why does the MC even want to be there? Slightly entertaining story. Good for brain rot.

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