Review Detail of 8ightbit in Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]
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I honestly don't know how to describe this.. The story progression is extremely slow and longwinded.. Like for example, MC goes on his first mission, at chapter 28.. The comedy is practically non-existent and dry to the point that you'd find more moisture on the crusty feet of your 95 year old grandmother.. The story is extremely dull and there's no progression, quite literally.. Like one moment MC is just a normal guy, then suddenly decides to becomes a cannibal that drinks blood willingly without batting an eye, and even takes great pleasure from it.. it is just disgusting and weird.. Like what sane person would do that, MC was normal???? idk what author is doing with this story tbh, I feel like, he wants the MC personality to be "cool" "baddass" or "mysterious" ..... unless, your a immature little brat, that thinks frowning or doing the duckface when you're getting your picture taken is cool, it is none of those.. I can only describe MC as; "Ughh".. yes, that's how I describe it folks.. ^^ MC is not interesting, and that is basically a fanfic killer, because, If your MC isn't good or interesting then, why would anyone read this? There's no planning or structure to the story, it is too serious, a smidge of darkness and basically boring.. and this story wasn't meant to be those things, It is about traveling the omni-verse where characters of fiction come alive! It is about MC having fun in basically infinite worlds.. It is none of that and a disappointment.. so yeah.. this is my review.. If you found it helpful you're welcome for the time saved.. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability of Updates - 3/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 2/5 Overall/total - 1.8 / 5
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This is the effect of the "player's mind" skill, which makes him see the world as a game, and always keeps it calm
Genesis_YT:that's because he didn't need to do you think a normal person can suddenly run at a crowd of zombies.
What I mean is, imagine, you.. You're a perfectly law abiding citizen, you pay your taxes, you grew up in a loving family, basically, had a pretty normal life with ups and downs.. So, will you one day, just start drinking blood and become a cannibal, out of the blue, and throw away all your morality randomly, because you got a system?.. ?????? a normal person wouldn't do that, unless they've always been psychotic.. whereas the MC was normal from all accounts.. so basically like I said no character building.. it is objective criticism, if author can't handle it, then.. what can i do? Oh, and I've been reading "Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)" recently, you should try it, it's good.. Or if your looking for a good vampy story, that's done right, take note from this "A Hunger for Blood and Magic"
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in the original gamer han Jin woo (don't know if this is his right name) becomes a near emotionless killer so this is pretty accurate when having the gamers mind
8ightbit:What I mean is, imagine, you.. You're a perfectly law abiding citizen, you pay your taxes, you grew up in a loving family, basically, had a pretty normal life with ups and downs.. So, will you one day, just start drinking blood and become a cannibal, out of the blue, and throw away all your morality randomly, because you got a system?.. ?????? a normal person wouldn't do that, unless they've always been psychotic.. whereas the MC was normal from all accounts.. so basically like I said no character building.. it is objective criticism, if author can't handle it, then.. what can i do? Oh, and I've been reading "Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)" recently, you should try it, it's good.. Or if your looking for a good vampy story, that's done right, take note from this "A Hunger for Blood and Magic"
synopsis: unrealistic romances and slowpaced people:why are the romances so bland and why is this story slow paced
Moge_KO:You didn't even mention every conversation with his Harem is bland and uninteresting. Honestly, This just seems like a wish fulfilment Novel with the Author inserted as the main protagonist.
Genesis_YT:in the original gamer han Jin woo (don't know if this is his right name) becomes a near emotionless killer so this is pretty accurate when having the gamers mind
that's because he didn't need to do you think a normal person can suddenly run at a crowd of zombies.
Zarc_Dragnero:He didn't kill humans, only killed monster from exp