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KumThrone4mthCommentedFirst we nerf the MC, Then we disregard the MC in exchange of Creative lore dumps in the form of a story. Is this about the First Soul, or about The War in Heaven? Quite frankly, Are we even needing the MC at this point? What's special about him now? THE God thrown away into a mere C'Tan Prototype body. What now? Are we going to follow his "Oh SO FABULIOUS" adventures across the universe HE made? Sure he can Manipulate the warp, Woo-di-doo... And that changes what? He practically lost his place/And anything special once you nerfed him.
Ch 21 Tragedy of the Necrontyr- KumThrone4mthCommented
Mandalore, Its a great starting place. Full of Fit Warriors and Cultures so diverse that it's almost natural.
Lastly, are there actually any worlds that Corvinius could go to without having to worry about an angsty Sith or paranoid Jedi? If not then could you give me opinions on an original planet to work from? - KumThrone5mthCommented
Was it necessary to kill Morgan? I get the theme and all, but like its our favorite boi morgan.
This paragraph has been deleted. - KumThrone1yrReplied to Jim_Odette_D
Also, Please keep up the good work. I do not mean to discourage you. You are by far another great 40k Writer, just the divation urked me.
"A Chaos servant to the Ruinous Power; the Dark Gods that sought to threaten and enslave Mankind and its Imperium. The Psyker, is empowered by the Warp; his connection to his Dark God – which had allowed him to create a portal in which he had made in a means to escape. In short, we were forced along and now ended here." She finished, until a man who bear an insignia of 'thunder' spoke up. "Wait. So, how many Dark Gods are there?" "Four of which – The Wrathful Khorne, The Devious Tzeentch, The Pestilential Nurgle and Cruel Slaanesh" - KumThrone1yrReplied to KumThrone
And before you say ANYTHING, EVERY guardsman in a regiment that regularly fights the forces of CHAOS knows not to speak its name, nor it's false gods. That goes especially for Kriegsmen. Let's not even get into why a WATCHMASTER of all things is just spewing out Imperium knowledge to an unknown faction/group of Humans/Mutants and Xenos alike. At first, you had the Krieg mindset to a T, Now you are diverting from it... Making the Krieg… Well not even Krieg anymore, They may be "Your" Krieg, but not the Canon Krieg.
"A Chaos servant to the Ruinous Power; the Dark Gods that sought to threaten and enslave Mankind and its Imperium. The Psyker, is empowered by the Warp; his connection to his Dark God – which had allowed him to create a portal in which he had made in a means to escape. In short, we were forced along and now ended here." She finished, until a man who bear an insignia of 'thunder' spoke up. "Wait. So, how many Dark Gods are there?" "Four of which – The Wrathful Khorne, The Devious Tzeentch, The Pestilential Nurgle and Cruel Slaanesh" - KumThrone1yrCommented
And dropped. Ruined the Krieg in this book. Sigh, onto the next.
"A Chaos servant to the Ruinous Power; the Dark Gods that sought to threaten and enslave Mankind and its Imperium. The Psyker, is empowered by the Warp; his connection to his Dark God – which had allowed him to create a portal in which he had made in a means to escape. In short, we were forced along and now ended here." She finished, until a man who bear an insignia of 'thunder' spoke up. "Wait. So, how many Dark Gods are there?" "Four of which – The Wrathful Khorne, The Devious Tzeentch, The Pestilential Nurgle and Cruel Slaanesh" - KumThrone1yrCommented
Alrighttt, I can tell this is for the more smart people of webnovel... so I'm going to head out. I can barely keep up with any of this without getting confused. Mmm yes, I announced my departure.
What if you did it in a single process but neuron by neuron so that you have a single stream of consciousness continually half running on part of your organic brain and half running on a computer emulating the copied neurons that was hooked inline to the parts of your brain that were copied and destroyed? That was a more complicated conversion process but it was possible with nanomachines and a neural mesh. Before her memories of such a process considered it needlessly complex, but today she came to appreciate why someone would have constructed such a process. Hmmm, to say that the memories that used to be referred to as second set might be slightly eccentric was a bit of an understatement. - KumThrone1yrCommentedCh 16 Chapter 16
- KumThrone1yrCommentedCh 1 1-That's All She Wrote
- KumThrone1yrReplied to Whitestair_Ivory
How bout you go into his shoes in a High pace action scene? Hes only human after all.
Keith then moved his revolver to Owen and pulled the trigger, and the bullet straight went to Owen's chest. Leaving him dropped to the floor after taking a blow directly to his body. - KumThrone1yrReplied to ArtoriapendraragonCh 13 Chapter 13: Horizons Dawn
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I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS DAY!
[Mjolnir Powered assault armor blueprints] (Epic) - KumThrone1yrReplied to Vooples
You sir just won the world, And made me dump this dumpster fire.
My first wish was to have the memories, experiences, riches, and Items as Ragnar from a game series from a game I made called "The Iron heart," A Viking-based game that featured exploration unseen in games made in the last century A game where you would adventure as a character of your choosing namely.