Okay time to review Ig. Well let's start with writing quality shall we? The writing quality is actually good if not excellent. There are not many First person pov I've come across during my time at webnovel so it's definitely a plus. Story development is good, the start was a little slow but the pacing picked up after 3rd chapter or so. Character design, yeah that's a bit tricky. I don't see much depth in character besides the main character. Oh while we are at the topic let me tell you, I love! I LOVE! Ryan and Dia's relationship lol, they remind me of Lith and Solus. World Background, there's not much lore but I like how the world is developing rn. I feel like author have a vision to portray here and I'm more than willing to see it come to life. All in all I'm liking the story so far right now, so here's my 5 star review! 🥰
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First of all, A huge thanks for the 5-star review! And yea I actually changed it from tpp to fpp a week back, as for the pacing, well a few of my 'friends' told me that it was too fast that's why I asked you guys. As for the character development, there will be fillers for the side characters and the main characters will be developed as the main-stream continues. The vision for the world you talked about in the review... I am too emotional that there's someone who can tell that there's a world that I already have in mind! Actually, its an amalgamation of the worlds I want myself to be isekai'd, and I put special care in making it a bit versatile (you'll see when I show you, hehe). And one again a huge thanks for the 5-star review! I am rearing to take you guys to a rollercoaster ride of emotions like my mentor!
