DarkElven6Lv142yr

2022-04-01 03:14

Would have summoned a pen, but it seems that feature isn't working currently. I really enjoy the story thus far (15 chapters in). Would really like to see more updates for this story. I know you have it in you Rookie. Writing Quality will go up with time, but you have a good stable plot going on and I can't wait to see how it turns out. We need more fantasy stories on WebNovel! Keep up the good work!

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