Writing Quality(4) - I noticed some mistakes but it's easily ignored. The length of the chapters is also fine for me. Stability of Updates(5) - Well, it's better than my schedule. Story Development(3) - Since we haven't gone into the major complication yet. Character Design(4) - I dunno, I don't find you explaining character appearances except for the main character himself, but since the title itself stated "In Naruto..." then it's clear Naruto fans would be the ones who click this. World Background(4) - Some of the lore got overly exerted. No, it's not like Hiruzen's personality got forcefully changed into a that it became a Hiruzen Bashing fics like the other fanfictions. But "Having no chakra" is being overly labeled as "tragedy" at first. Just a bit though. And of course, it's just my opinion. PS: Author, If this review irked you somehow, feel free to delete it. PPS: I just read this whole thing, and I found out from the other reviews you keep restarting the fic. So yeah, I'd say it's already a good start. But I will be hoping for some more plot twists sooner or later. PPPS: I like it, it is a very good read.
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