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carlos_boral
carlos_boralLv12yr
2022-03-28 10:51

Well first this is a rewrite and this one goes to the topic of multiversal scale and this one has also insta op mc i mean he goes from human streamer to a god in the multiversal scale tho not the most powerful still top tier. And i guess it also somewhat a hentai/comedy now?? Kinda disappointing since the previous version was better tho it kinda had a rough start

In The Multiverse as a Jujutsu Sorcerer.

Dio_Za_Editor
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Trollface
TrollfaceLv1

1. this is the 3rd restart of this stupid novel. 2 the author is stupid and his mc is also dumb as a cork. no plot and logic, complete idiocy. this version of fan fiction is even worse than all the previous ones combined. and the star rating is 4.6. people are blind

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Arthur_christian
Arthur_christianLv14

why did you restart the novel again it's strange you know you don't make a announcement and just voila the novel is came back to just the first chapters please answer me why you rewrite this

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

I can not anymore. I can only read up to chapter 3 but I feel like I got dumber. Author needs to read more fanfic and decent stories. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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TheViciousVillain
TheViciousVillainLv2

well uhm the story is so good! Grammar: clear and understandable stability of updates: good story development: amazing/fascinating character design: well~ well~ well~ we are talking abt Gojo here~ world background: who are you kidding this is naru-verse! of course, it's amazing! final evaluation: 5STARS~~ author-sama continue the hard work! i really liked this fanfic~

2yr
Martial_Pursuit
Martial_PursuitLv4

previous on is better, the comedy is just meh, wait until chapter 23 is not a way to hook your audience. the first two chapter is extremely cringe, just start when he already a Ninja and build the story from there is far better.

2yr
Door_kun
Door_kunLv4

Writing Quality(4) - I noticed some mistakes but it's easily ignored. The length of the chapters is also fine for me. Stability of Updates(5) - Well, it's better than my schedule. Story Development(3) - Since we haven't gone into the major complication yet. Character Design(4) - I dunno, I don't find you explaining character appearances except for the main character himself, but since the title itself stated "In Naruto..." then it's clear Naruto fans would be the ones who click this. World Background(4) - Some of the lore got overly exerted. No, it's not like Hiruzen's personality got forcefully changed into a that it became a Hiruzen Bashing fics like the other fanfictions. But "Having no chakra" is being overly labeled as "tragedy" at first. Just a bit though. And of course, it's just my opinion. PS: Author, If this review irked you somehow, feel free to delete it. PPS: I just read this whole thing, and I found out from the other reviews you keep restarting the fic. So yeah, I'd say it's already a good start. But I will be hoping for some more plot twists sooner or later. PPPS: I like it, it is a very good read.

2yr
UwUami
UwUamiLv1

I might be biased, since the author is a friend of mine, but I've reviewed chapters before they've released. And I have to say, he can write really well. Some of his writing might be simple, but it really does immerse me a bit. He's really great at describing things. Of course there are areas he needs to work on, but he has been doing a good job so far.

2yr
lawrence_
lawrence_Lv4

why did you delete the chapters ? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2yr
Disfigured
DisfiguredLv10

although the starting was not that good but still a lot better than most of the fanfics.

2yr
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