1. this is the 3rd restart of this stupid novel. 2 the author is stupid and his mc is also dumb as a cork. no plot and logic, complete idiocy. this version of fan fiction is even worse than all the previous ones combined. and the star rating is 4.6. people are blind

why did you restart the novel again it's strange you know you don't make a announcement and just voila the novel is came back to just the first chapters please answer me why you rewrite this

Well first this is a rewrite and this one goes to the topic of multiversal scale and this one has also insta op mc i mean he goes from human streamer to a god in the multiversal scale tho not the most powerful still top tier. And i guess it also somewhat a hentai/comedy now?? Kinda disappointing since the previous version was better tho it kinda had a rough start

I can not anymore. I can only read up to chapter 3 but I feel like I got dumber. Author needs to read more fanfic and decent stories. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

previous on is better, the comedy is just meh, wait until chapter 23 is not a way to hook your audience. the first two chapter is extremely cringe, just start when he already a Ninja and build the story from there is far better.

Writing Quality(4) - I noticed some mistakes but it's easily ignored. The length of the chapters is also fine for me. Stability of Updates(5) - Well, it's better than my schedule. Story Development(3) - Since we haven't gone into the major complication yet. Character Design(4) - I dunno, I don't find you explaining character appearances except for the main character himself, but since the title itself stated "In Naruto..." then it's clear Naruto fans would be the ones who click this. World Background(4) - Some of the lore got overly exerted. No, it's not like Hiruzen's personality got forcefully changed into a that it became a Hiruzen Bashing fics like the other fanfictions. But "Having no chakra" is being overly labeled as "tragedy" at first. Just a bit though. And of course, it's just my opinion. PS: Author, If this review irked you somehow, feel free to delete it. PPS: I just read this whole thing, and I found out from the other reviews you keep restarting the fic. So yeah, I'd say it's already a good start. But I will be hoping for some more plot twists sooner or later. PPPS: I like it, it is a very good read.

I might be biased, since the author is a friend of mine, but I've reviewed chapters before they've released. And I have to say, he can write really well. Some of his writing might be simple, but it really does immerse me a bit. He's really great at describing things. Of course there are areas he needs to work on, but he has been doing a good job so far.

why did you delete the chapters ? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

although the starting was not that good but still a lot better than most of the fanfics.