Item: Master Hong's Lucky Bride
Rating: 1.6
Author: Timetogo

TimetogoLv32yr

2022-05-28 15:45

So I am at about chapter 15 and the fl is just ungrateful and wicked. Who abuses someone in a coma? is she alright? and its the way she doesn't see anything wrong about that. all she does is complain about her amazing mother in law. literally a white lotus. at first I thought it was just her way of flirting but this girl genuinely wants her husband to die and she doesn't mind accelerating that process. I guess the author is going for an enemies to lovers after he wakes up? Secondly, she has a sister who I assume is older. Why wasn't she there when her parents died and they went bankrupt? she calls the female lead after everything has happened. And why won't the female lead rely on her married sister by the way. that's literally the most reasonable thing for her to do. Also if the author is going for an enemies to lovers trope I don't think that will make sense at all. ML is 10 years older than FL (literally a sugar daddy). Can someone tell me how that dynamic will work?

Master Hong's Lucky Bride

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