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2022-03-08 14:09

This is based on 40 chapters & will include vague spoilers. For starters, FL is a 20 year old girl who grew up doted on by her wealthy parents but is now bankrupt with her father missing & her mother having committed suicide. Because of that, she doesn't have anyone else to rely on & has agreed to marry an unconscious man. She complains to ML about things that may not seem like a big deal to readers & even makes comments about her mother in law that come off as ungrateful (when her mother in law has been kind to her for the most part). I guess they're said in a jokingly way since the mother in law, & even ML himself, think of her as being mischievous but not meaning harm. Like most readers, I'm bothered by her carelessness of how she treats ML at times (by pinching him & hitting him) as a way to vent. Sometimes she does show self reflection about it but I wish she wouldn't take that action at all. So, FL isn't really the most likable character but I kept reading to see what would happen when ML woke up (which he does in chapter 40 😪 ).

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This is an updated review after finishing the story. FL pretty much stays the same throughout so if you weren't liking her in the early chapters, then you shouldn't continue reading. Her sister also stays being annoying by continuing to let her failed relationship encourage FL to leave ML too, though it's just conversational talk. At chapter 107, you can tell that the appeal for this story was lost as the writing is rushed telling us about FL & ML's happy ending & suddenly focusing on ML's sister for the remaining chapters (like why was that necessary when you could've actually wrote more about the leads). So, I wouldn't recommend you spending time/money on this story.

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Wallflower_Monk
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20 chapter review with spoilers: 💛 Summary: The FL's dad goes missing after a plane crash, the family then goes bankrupt and her mom commits suicide. She has a sister who loves her but can't help her. So the FL decides to marry the ML who is in a coma. There is a 10 year age gap between them- she's 20 and he's 30 years old. The ML starts to become aware of his surroundings once the FL marries him. 📝 What I think about the novel: I have to say I both love and hate the FL. She is a spoiled entitled princess who gives you the feeling of those sterotypical rich girls in teen school movies 😓. She's also sometimes too childish and rash and it comes out in a bad way. When she wants to vent out in anger she will pinch, kick and hit her unconcious husband. It's just wrong. Also the way she thinks about her 'vegetable' husband is harsh. In the beginning she is basically okay with him dying😢. What I love about her, is that sometimes instead of coming across as a childish spoiled brat, she has a whimsical and refreshing attitude. She can be mischievous so she ends up doing things that feel silly, cute and funny. I did find myself laughing at her a few times. From the synopsis you know that the ML has been in love with her for 10 years 😬. I don't know how this is going to be written because she was 10 years old at the time. We have not had a POV for the ML yet so I cannot say what he is like unfortunately. I think given how questionable the FL is in terms of character, the ML will also be a bit shady. Just a guess though 🤔. There are quite a few abrupt scene changes that annoyed and confused me which brought my rating down. Overall I have mixed feeling about this and I think that not everyone will enjoy the FL's personality. *Note: If you're looking for a sweet, good romance with FL marrying a ML in a coma, I recommend 'I Married a Disabled Tyrant After Transmigrating'. It's not on this app- search for it online.

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