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cassia_mLv43yr
2022-03-05 13:06

== Review after 8 chapters == I usually don't review novels this early, however this one is an exception. We have a typical story set up. Beautiful broke female lead marries into the male lead's rich family. The male lead is in a comatose state and our female lead has to take care of him. This could have been a decent story from the get go but the female lead's character isn't my cup of tea. She comes off as someone who isn't appreciative of what the Zhang family is providing for her in return for her marriage with their son. Given that both parties benefit from this, I didn't expect our female lead to complain about not having money to the comatose male lead. She even accused him of hiding his money and giving it to his mom. Though she may just be saying this in a joking manner, she did happily spend the money that was given to her by her mother in law. What got me the most was the abuse that she gave the comatose male lead to vent out her anger. Is this seen as okay because they're married? I don't think I can see past her pinching and pushing him around to relieve her emotions. So, would this get better past the 8 chapters? I wouldn't know be side of what I just tried to read. From the description and the female lead's attitude, it'll probably be a novel that's about a spoiled female lead. Though if you're one to like female lead's that have a bit more flair in her personality, you may like this one.

Master Hong's Lucky Bride

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4.3
110 Chs

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I need proper reviews man 😩😩 saying it’s a good book ain’t helping no one I’m telling you right now 😭😭.

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