Review Detail of MORPHEOUS in My Hollywood System
Review detail
The story is quite great and the progress was done well. However, I don't quite like how the MC changed many things in Harry Potter... not because I am a fan of it, but because the author didn't seem to put some thought on this. For example, the MC modernized Hogwarts which not only destroy the historical and mystery ambiance of Hogwarts but also changed the whole plot. You must know that pure-bloods were repulsed and disdained muggle creations and if the MC modernized it, this plot would've been erased and Voldemort might not even exist. Another thing is, the rewards of the system seem to be random and didn't follow some rules.
My Hollywood System
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I don't think reading ahead would fix his legitimate criticism on the changes made to Harry Potter, he has a point. Hogwarts being old is part of its mystery and grandeur, modernizing it is pretty much opposed to even regular wizard thinking. Even the wizards that don't believe in the pure-blood theory are pretty set in their ways, the Wizarding society is pretty much a display of what it looks like to constantly live in the glory of the past an snub change or progress, which gives rise to the dark lords and their ideas. Wizards are pretty much the stereotype of old people, ignorant or outright disdainful of modern progress until it becomes so ubiquitous that it's just a part of life now, not something new. So his review has a legitimate point of a change to a story being counter to its overall narrative, which kind of makes a good example for your most recent chapters being completely different than the narrative you've built over all the previous chapters and why you are getting so many comments telling you that it isn't good.
DreamThree:you should have continued to read ahead.
If you read ahead you'll see that the author threw out his rewrites of Harry Potter before the MC was going to start sending out the book to different publishers.
coldpyr0:I don't think reading ahead would fix his legitimate criticism on the changes made to Harry Potter, he has a point. Hogwarts being old is part of its mystery and grandeur, modernizing it is pretty much opposed to even regular wizard thinking. Even the wizards that don't believe in the pure-blood theory are pretty set in their ways, the Wizarding society is pretty much a display of what it looks like to constantly live in the glory of the past an snub change or progress, which gives rise to the dark lords and their ideas. Wizards are pretty much the stereotype of old people, ignorant or outright disdainful of modern progress until it becomes so ubiquitous that it's just a part of life now, not something new. So his review has a legitimate point of a change to a story being counter to its overall narrative, which kind of makes a good example for your most recent chapters being completely different than the narrative you've built over all the previous chapters and why you are getting so many comments telling you that it isn't good.
FOR THOSE THAT WANT TO READ THIS FICTION. I did read 180 chapters or so. This fiction starts okay, with not so many grammar mistakes. The MC is transmigrated/reincarnated in a similar but different world than ours, and conveniently this new world has poor entertainment and actors from our world that are unknown with changed names. Like Robert Downey jr. being a low-class actor or some sh with a changed name. The MC has a system that can buy skills and scripts and magically change points for real money. The plot point of this fiction is: The MC uses the system to make entertainment to get points to get skills and upgrade said skills and so on. The MC's objective is not to make money or live a super fulfilling life but to recreate "masterpieces" from our world that we dont have in this world. Did you see how convenient this fiction feels from this mini-review? Read and you will see how so much of this novel plot is dumb, with an aware system lockdown for a sudden challenge quest, or skill that makes the MC sees the future and he dont really have a choice to avoid said outcome -cause plot, that makes fell cheap. I did read till chapter 180, wasted my time, and if this mini-review can make 1 person that thinks that these points i made are a turn-off and not read this novel, then that's okay cause i really needed a lower-rated review about said points when I was starting so I could use my time on better things.
Uh, this is a month old review and I'm not acting like anything. I did take reader's opinions. It's fine if you don't like it but I'm trying my best to present a good novel.
whatissunkanmi:out here acting like you haven't dulled this whole thing.
