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DotComplex
DotComplexLv32yr
2022-09-19 01:29

When the author released not one but TWO new books and asked us to support them, we were assured that it would in no way affect the daily updates of MHS. I was doubtful of this politician-like promise as MHS, being a fanfic, earns him nothing, but I was willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. Sure enough, while his other books update regularly MHS has seen 2 updates in 12 days. I could stomach it if the author came forward and admitted to his mistakes, saying that he had overreached - but no, he just neglects his promise and this work in favor of more successful ones as far as I can see. I'm very tempted to go to his other books and one-star spam those with an army of alts, but I'd like to think I'm not THAT petty. Still, I am disappointed to say the least, and I'm sure many of your fans who supported you from day 1 are too.

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DreamThree
DreamThreeAuthor

Dear the chapters uploaded on the other two books were from stockpile till mid-last week. This month hasn't been well for me, and I have been trying to get back to writing but unable to due to some personal reasons. Today too I have tried another hand at consistency with MHS, also wrote the previous week's bonus chapter you earned by voting this novel. It's true I underestimated the pressure which was going to come at me when I decided to write 3 books at once, but then, I also had personal reasons to write a third book. I am still trying to be consistent, let's see what happens tomorrow, today was Day 1. I hope you have a good day, and I will see you in the comment sections :)

DotComplex
DotComplexLv3

Well in that case I apologize, and it's good to know you haven't abandoned us :) I'll delete this and put in a glowing 4.8 star review the second you sort your personal life out (and I sincerely hope you do), and we get back to semi-regular updates.

DreamThree:Dear the chapters uploaded on the other two books were from stockpile till mid-last week. This month hasn't been well for me, and I have been trying to get back to writing but unable to due to some personal reasons. Today too I have tried another hand at consistency with MHS, also wrote the previous week's bonus chapter you earned by voting this novel. It's true I underestimated the pressure which was going to come at me when I decided to write 3 books at once, but then, I also had personal reasons to write a third book. I am still trying to be consistent, let's see what happens tomorrow, today was Day 1. I hope you have a good day, and I will see you in the comment sections :)
DotComplex
DotComplexLv3

no motivation to remove this so far lol, not a single chapter this week

whatissunkanmi
whatissunkanmiLv3

that's because they lied to your face Loooool

DotComplex:no motivation to remove this so far lol, not a single chapter this week
DotComplex
DotComplexLv3

:(

whatissunkanmi:that's because they lied to your face Loooool
VoteRat
VoteRatLv4

Author, I think your main problem is writing way too much. In your own words, you have told me that you write 10k words per day(Evidence below). For context, Stephen King, arguably one of the best authors alive today, only writes 2K words per day. (You can look it up) You were writing in one day, the same as Stephen King does in five Days. Doesn't that seem absurd to you? Also, the 2K words that he writes, are just the first draft. I don't know if you have a person to edit your chapters for you, or you do it yourself, or you don't even edit them and upload the first draft. But if you do edit your chapters by yourself, then that is even more absurd, arguably the editing face is harder than making the first draft. But let me just leave you with this, imagine what you could do, if you took all the effort into writing 10K words per day, and condensed it down into one novel, and instead of a lot of quantity, you put all of the efforts into making this novel something akin to Reverend Insanity, or The Legendary Mechanic, or any highly acclaimed novel. I think if you did that, then you could make a masterpiece.

DreamThree:Dear the chapters uploaded on the other two books were from stockpile till mid-last week. This month hasn't been well for me, and I have been trying to get back to writing but unable to due to some personal reasons. Today too I have tried another hand at consistency with MHS, also wrote the previous week's bonus chapter you earned by voting this novel. It's true I underestimated the pressure which was going to come at me when I decided to write 3 books at once, but then, I also had personal reasons to write a third book. I am still trying to be consistent, let's see what happens tomorrow, today was Day 1. I hope you have a good day, and I will see you in the comment sections :)
NotLastApril
NotLastAprilLv4

Deader than dead

AuthoriTet
AuthoriTetLv4

is this dropped?

DreamThree:Dear the chapters uploaded on the other two books were from stockpile till mid-last week. This month hasn't been well for me, and I have been trying to get back to writing but unable to due to some personal reasons. Today too I have tried another hand at consistency with MHS, also wrote the previous week's bonus chapter you earned by voting this novel. It's true I underestimated the pressure which was going to come at me when I decided to write 3 books at once, but then, I also had personal reasons to write a third book. I am still trying to be consistent, let's see what happens tomorrow, today was Day 1. I hope you have a good day, and I will see you in the comment sections :)
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