Review Detail of SkyNeves in My Hollywood System
Review detail
Hello everyone, the name's Sky not hat anyone asked but with unnecessary introductions out of the way let's go to the review and rating based on the latest chapter(ch.13). 1-Writing Quality: The story has a nice writing quality and I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar errors, if there are I didn't see them because I was immersed in the story. [5 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: The story has a nice feel to it, we get a minimal background of the MC's past life as to not take too much of the main focus that is his current life. The chapters are all connected and don't randomly seem like we missed a part of it, it's also very fluid and has a great word count for those who are interested in that. [5 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: The characters so far have a decent personality and I think it's still soon to see if they have a lot of dept but so far the MC and all the people he interacted with have nice depth to them. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: The updates seem to follow a certain schedule and each release so far has had more than 2 chapters so it's a win in my book. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: The world has a decent amount of details, enough to know places but not enough to feel immersed in the locations. What I mean is the setting of the scenes like describing certain locations, in this story we get descriptions like "small but clean apartment" but we don't get a "Uncle Charles office was as one would expect, it had a few pictures with current famous celebrities and some old ones, there where also some trophies and ...". This is what I mean, it doesn't paint a picture in the mind, I just think yeah he's in the office done. And since it may not be a recurring scene it might not matter much but at that moment it's important. [4 Stars Here] Overall:4.8 Personal Opinion: I was recommended this book by @Extra26 and it was one of those recommendations that you don't regret so try reading at least 5 chapters before you say "D**n it has Harem tag, Ouch System cheat" and so on before giving it a try because the execution of the story seems worth it so far.
My Hollywood System
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No problem, it's a very good book. Also to people looking for another good book to read check out @Extra26's book.
Extra26:Thanks for checking it out on my recommendation.
Radioactive_Noodle:do you know if this is a translation or not? because translations are usually trash
Alien_Space_Bat:Your review is very good and accurate đ. I always check for reviews before reading and I was happy to find a good review.
Well so far it seems that way but I'm not sure because some times it gives "romantic relationship build up" vibes. Again as of now only one Romantic partner and it's probable that it'll stay this way.
0vrLrd71:I'm already reading this but I'm curious if the author backed out of the Harem route? from what I can tell they have but I'm not sure...
Hi, now to answer your questions. 1- This is an original story actually, at most it'd be a fanfiction of our world if that makes sense. It's an AU(Alternative Universe) of our earth where most masterpieces regarding movies, series, cartoons and so on weren't made. Some famous celebrities have their new world counterpart and some aren't even famous yet. 2- It's not a Harem, sorry if you where expecting for one. It has only one love interest and I don't know if it's set to stone or if it'll change. There's also the possibility of the MC breaking up with his LI(Love interest) and getting a new one but Harem doesn't seem to be the focus. I don't know if you'd want to read it but give it a try, just the first chapters and you can choose to continue or not.
Classic_Goose:Question 1. What fanfic is this? 2. Is it Harem? if so how many?
SkyNeves:Hi, now to answer your questions. 1- This is an original story actually, at most it'd be a fanfiction of our world if that makes sense. It's an AU(Alternative Universe) of our earth where most masterpieces regarding movies, series, cartoons and so on weren't made. Some famous celebrities have their new world counterpart and some aren't even famous yet. 2- It's not a Harem, sorry if you where expecting for one. It has only one love interest and I don't know if it's set to stone or if it'll change. There's also the possibility of the MC breaking up with his LI(Love interest) and getting a new one but Harem doesn't seem to be the focus. I don't know if you'd want to read it but give it a try, just the first chapters and you can choose to continue or not.
SkyNeves:No problem, it's a very good book. Also to people looking for another good book to read check out @Extra26's book.
LulzLowKey:unfortunately I am extremely biased against harems and systems. harem honestly make no sense to me, while no matter what setting a system will feel like a crutch that takes away any satisfaction I get when the mc progresses.