this fic is well written but you can clearly see that without stated writing this fic without doing research about code grass by how many mistake about the plot you can find. another thing that make this a extremely unpleasant read is that the mc is a slave to the canon story so even when he have the chance to create a business empire that can control the world he dont don't do anything significant simple because of the fear of changing the future,these type of fic are the worst

There is very little understanding of Code Geass in this story, and that bothered me, but my biggest gripe was how aimless the protagonist was. In a dozen chapters there was never any kind of declared or implied purpose for the MC. He just floated around like a jellyfish. You did a good job creating a sense of progression over the decades, and for a bit you showed that you can stay in the pocket and deliver meaningful character interaction, but you ran afoul of starting a story over a century before the source start and then wanting to rush to that start without altering anything. It made Alister very impactless, almost neutered as a protagonist.

Came back to the book after a couple of months and i can safely say that nothing has happened for almost 86 chapters. side characters screaming at each other in robots is the norm. Plus the dude is still a cuck so theres that too

Hi, Author here. Just a heads up. I am only writing this on my phone so please don't expect a perfect grammatical skills, I am also an newbie in writing so don't expect a pro writing skills. I am still experimenting on how to write my ideas so I might change styles in the early chapters. I hope you enjoy my writing and please leave a review if you do on what you liked so I will make sure to add more of it depending if my crude plot planning allows it.

Grammar is readable even though writing quality isn't great but at least it was good to read. MC is a lustful person but who isn't? (except incel), MC also isn't a psycho who doesn't have emotions, he has emotions like sympathy which I really appreciate. The story so far is good! Hope for the best! Good job Author.

The mc doesn't do anything at all he doesn't even have any goals. Plus around chapters 6 I think he gets a girl pregnant then stays for a few years then leaves just because it will cause him problems the mc is just so unlikable for me I just cant read anymore

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only on chapter 2 but had to say it. the writing so far feels like a script in a play. it feels robotic. like its not meant to be read but watched on a stage.

It is getting boring around chapter 100+ so i stopped

i likes the start soms wat bug the the Guy became a **** and he Just left wife and child behind because he is emortel end left Them with the Sandnes that they could not buurt there huisband