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Yvonne_Jemutai
Yvonne_JemutaiLv12yr
2022-07-23 06:33

Great book, great writing, message is clearly passed although some bit more more of editing would help. All in all as a writer I appreciate good work when I see it. Keep the spirit up and you'll conquer mountains, I assure you.

Forced Bride Of The Vampire Lord

I_am_Creator
4.3
544 Chs

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Ttt2
Ttt2Lv1

Since you are the last comment i decided to ask u a question please Is hazel the same girl from his past And she is a witch isn't she ?

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Yvonne_Jemutai
Yvonne_JemutaiLv1

Not there yet, will tell you once I come across that

Ttt2:Since you are the last comment i decided to ask u a question please Is hazel the same girl from his past And she is a witch isn't she ?
2yr
Ttt2
Ttt2Lv1

Well since i reached it before let me tell you she is his past life love

Yvonne_Jemutai:Not there yet, will tell you once I come across that
2yr
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Yvonne_Jemutai
Yvonne_JemutaiLv1

I'm all eyes

Ttt2:Well since i reached it before let me tell you she is his past life love
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Nai_Nem
Nai_NemLv1

where did you read? can give some spoilers? will hazel leave rafael after ending her father/vincent? and move with lucien? Now, after kissing lucien, hazel decided to spend life on with lucien, how long is it from rafael/hazel knowing that hazel as rafael's past-isabella? and what happens about rafael/hazel relationship? if you know... Sorry, got many questions...

Ttt2:Well since i reached it before let me tell you she is his past life love
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Ttt2
Ttt2Lv1

Nah dude i am really sorry i didn't read the premium chps i reached just where you describe hazel juat kisses lucien

Nai_Nem:where did you read? can give some spoilers? will hazel leave rafael after ending her father/vincent? and move with lucien? Now, after kissing lucien, hazel decided to spend life on with lucien, how long is it from rafael/hazel knowing that hazel as rafael's past-isabella? and what happens about rafael/hazel relationship? if you know... Sorry, got many questions...
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