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Shade_Arjuun
Shade_ArjuunLv142yr
2022-01-26 20:02

as a fellow author I gotta say that the start of this book gave me inspiration for my own romance novels.. since I'm an amateur in the department.. First of all i need to applaud the author for story development. the story races forward with intrigue that doesn't feel rushed in my opinion. I admire that we slowly get to know about Hayley and the ever supportive Anne (best girl as far as I've read. don't shame me if she turns negative). I was apprehensive of the King and turns out... yep I was right..maybe he's a cool dude with a hard face.. I'll find out soon enough.. I the story so far... WS is definitely a 5..I enjoy the atmosphere created by the author, especially at the wedding. SD definitely a 5.. doesn't drag out and make the story hollow at the start. CD I gave 4 because I feel there can be some improvement especially for Anne as I wanted to know more about her design while she was interacting with the crowd and the King afterwards. perhaps that's just me being nitpicky. WB is a 5, I believe the author will expand on it some more as the story is still beginning overall fantastic read... Write on author.

Forced Bride Of The Vampire Lord

I_am_Creator
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I_am_Creator
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thank you for your kind and inspiring words.

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I love it!! love it!! love it!! Author's writing style is so simple and exquisite one could easily picture the scenes in mind. Loving Anne's character already, I'm intrigued by the work and hoping to see astounding development!! This book is filled with great potential and I hope you don't drop it💝💝💝🤩♥️♥️♥️❤️

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mashie_moya
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L.O.V.E Lovely Originally well written Very Addictive Extremely Awesomness all over..can't put it down[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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A relatively decent book that has a lot of potential to evolve to an outstanding one! 5-star review to help the book rise in ranks, hopefully!

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Yvonne_Jemutai
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Great book, great writing, message is clearly passed although some bit more more of editing would help. All in all as a writer I appreciate good work when I see it. Keep the spirit up and you'll conquer mountains, I assure you.

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Hmmmmmmmmmmmm slow slow burn………………………………………….

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Ochuko_Obahor
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thank you writer ( I am creator). I am already engrossed in this novel. too bad I don't have enough coins to properly enjoy this book. all in all..good work.

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Farjana_Tasnim_2031
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I loved the plot. the female lead has an amazing personality;a bit funny too.hope this review helps the story............. ...................

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_Michele_
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OK so I’m a little over halfway through the released chapters and it’s really an interesting story. However, it’s a tough read: the pronouns are an absolute mess (which makes it very difficult to clearly follow) and the chapters are mixed up and half of them are titled “bonus”…whatever that means. Author is in desperate need of an editor! Once this story gets cleaned up I can see it taking off, but right now only a die-hard reader who’s hooked will make the effort to struggle through this. Sorry, I really wanted to give this a higher rating, but this current English released version is just too sloppy.

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IzzyBella16
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Great Book! Although there is some errors, for example when it says she when it’s talking about he, or he when it’s talking about she, and leaving a work out of a sentence. I really love this book and its story, if you need a proof-reader, or editor just let me know I would love to do it.[img=recommend]

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