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2024-12-04 10:35

dragon-san probably you not care, after all you not update here anymore, but someone steal you work, is called: DxD: The Daily Life of the Inventor in another world, he copy and past you whole history and split in several small chapter and ask for patreon.

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When I like some novel, I tend to write some fast reviews. To write another with how story proggresed, because that's kind of important. See if story whould make it even better. Unfortunately, that's not exactly the case. There is some very obvious problems. Some minor, some... Might be pretty big. And first of all - yes, a villain tag doesn't work... At all. Probably the most useless tag in this God forsaken place. Oh well. The most glaring problem - it's not dxd story. Not because it's doesn't "follow Canon". But because there is just too little dxd elements in it. It's more like isekai with some dxd girls. And because of this, magic seems to be a lot less intresting. First of all, because it's a tool that we spend a lot time to discuss but have no use. And second, because author just use some very basic ideas, like electro - magnetic induction and somehow magic energy actually follow them... Yeah,no. If magic acts just like another energy, then it's shouldn't be called "magic". That's kind of important, ya know. Either way. I just hope it's whould proggresed at least to some kind of plot. Because right now, it's just a bunch of useless "wish-fulfillment" magic theories with a little bit of girls. But without any kind of story behind it. There is literally nothing more then a guy that summon chicks - that he doesn't need, to do more things - that doesn't have meaning... Not exactly a story, ya know. But, the grammar is fine and autor seems to have at least ideas-so, I kinda believe that later it becomes better. Or not. I tend to believe in a lot of nonsense lately.

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