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Saucy_boy
Saucy_boyLv42yr
2022-05-30 22:59

It’s a praise/bragging fest for the mc, for everything he does (even if he already did something more impressive) he brags about how easy it was and how smart he is, with the summoned girl in turn that somehow gets awed every time Also yes, it’s the usual ”saying the mc is a super genius so you don’t need to explain how he understand stuff he never interacted with before” which is not always a bad thing but cmon.

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Dragon15681
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I am gonna keep this one for the silliness of this. I am pretty sure I spend some time explaining stuff he made. Sometimes half of the chapter was just him doing something. Even the bragging was him simply telling not telling how 'amazing' it. I have no idea what you see as bragging or simply telling.

killersoul
killersoulLv13

so uh author what's the status for this book cause I kinda miss having new chapters

Dragon15681:I am gonna keep this one for the silliness of this. I am pretty sure I spend some time explaining stuff he made. Sometimes half of the chapter was just him doing something. Even the bragging was him simply telling not telling how 'amazing' it. I have no idea what you see as bragging or simply telling.
Kaxharu_Ryuzaki
Kaxharu_RyuzakiLv1

The author explains the inventions well and they are interesting, but it doesn't end up mattering much due to the excess of praise and reactions. It happens so many times that you start to lose interest, you end up thinking about how repetitive the situation is, the protagonist creates something, the girls are surprised or worried, then the protagonist says that it was easy to do and how superior it is compared to sacred gear . It reminded me too much of the headache that fanfic produces mixed with wuxia and it's not that this was one, but in parts it felt just as annoying. Maybe if I read a chapter from time to time I can appreciate it.

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