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Raylen2222_Hunt
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2024-03-28 19:05

it was a great story overall, but it's just stepping beyond boundaries of some a human should have mass killing, experimenting on living and non living, etc. when theirs so many better options for a genius. and his personality is just not my cup of tea. that's all but it's a good story.

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Is it? Then, what are 'better options' considering after theory, one needs to start experimenting on living subjects. It would be unrealistic if he remained 'normal' considering, after all he achieved, keeping the same values is absurd. Unless he is keen and is obsessed with original mundane morals, which he is not, as he doesn't value life as others do, no genius inventors over history were ordinary.

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