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Master_Celestial
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2022-02-28 18:10

Just curious, but will the Mc travel to different worlds? In other words, will there be Multiverse traveling? Cuz at the rate it is going, the Mc will dominate DxD at chapter 50 at the latest.

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Honestly, the only enemy mc sees is his improving his tech, not some big bad guy. Regarding multiverse... yeah there is an idea for that once mc goes to space

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