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Blackwater
BlackwaterLv112yr
2022-02-06 08:47

up until now ch. 25 or what ever it's basically a 1:1 copie for the MTL novel : I'm in Marvel with unlimited cards, and is at best only a polished up Translation. If you plan to make it your own novel by introducing change thats fine but many points it's a 1:1 copie including for example the line about the universe not speaking Chinese. I'm all for fanfics of fanfics but you have to introduce serious changes very soon, because this here is basically just a Translation with minimal to no changes, and has very little to do with a original work so far.

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