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I've seen this fanfic before....I don't know if Author is copying the story but will make a difference later on but I like it so far....And please tell me the sause of the cover...

I wish more high risers would do this, take some Chinese fan fic, and write another fan fic based on them, why? It's simple, there are lots of Chinese historical stories that are long and have great ideas, but they get lost to contain too much nationalism, racism, xenophobia and the like, if more western authors took these stories and wrote new stories based on them, making lots of edits in the parts that I said, cutting or even adding things, we would have fantastic stories, I say this without wanting to be aggressive with Chinese writers, but as I said many stories that are written in China are lost for the reasons I said, at least they are like that with the that ends up for our reading here in society. western

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Just terrible, among other things, the author knows nothing of how the military works and it gets real tiresome real quick. I mean none of the characters even act like real people let alone officers in a modern military. Never mind the fact that while I like a confident and or competent mc the guy is an arrogant *ss that looks down on everybody around him including Captain America as if the only reason he's worth anything (the system) has anything to do with his own natural talent or hard work. Completely SoD breaking.

although it has the same premise of the Chinese fic. i thought author would take a different approach. sadly, that's not the case, it's just the same as the Chinese fic. same starting point, same unreal military, same wuxia personality, same wuxia dialogue. overall 'meh'

up until now ch. 25 or what ever it's basically a 1:1 copie for the MTL novel : I'm in Marvel with unlimited cards, and is at best only a polished up Translation. If you plan to make it your own novel by introducing change thats fine but many points it's a 1:1 copie including for example the line about the universe not speaking Chinese. I'm all for fanfics of fanfics but you have to introduce serious changes very soon, because this here is basically just a Translation with minimal to no changes, and has very little to do with a original work so far.

As of now this is just a common Chinese MTL novel and copy paste of some others with same concept. I can't even continue reading with characters sounding like peng clan young master..... lol. Someone please tell me if this get better in future.

I like the translation but can anyone send me the link of the original or the name of the fanfic? Can't find it.