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King_Of_Beast
King_Of_BeastLv23yr
2022-02-18 16:40

A review after forty chapters. Well, Sabin did disappoint me with the previous title but thankfully he changed it since Dual Cultivation is not a core part of this story. As he said, there are some inconsistency in writing but for story development, character design, and world background, everything seems find for forty chapters. The world isn't fleshed out but the place where we visit are fleshed out and it slowly starts with the background of the characters. I love when characters are explored with emotions in the story even though some main characters were introduced without any background. They slowly get time to express their own feelings and emotions. Although Updates got little unstable during the middle, it was due to his health. So, I can't cut star for that. Well, story development is still on the early stage, but we are getting pretty darn cool progress with his village and the characters. Well, this is a review from me. I hope you will give free chapters a try and then decide whether to continue or not. As for why I didn't mention writing quality, well, as a early reader from his first book, his writing skill still sucks but enough to make a story understandable.

I Lied To Become Village Chief

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
4.9
96 Chs

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Thank you for your fleshed out review. This review deserves to get pinned.

3yr
aigotcha
aigotchaLv3

What was the old title?

3yr
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Alright! I am finally writing a review after twenty chapters. So, what can you expect from this novel? A lot of grammatical mistakes A little of bit inconsistency that you will find if you read it deeply A main character who basically lies to the entire world Kingdom building- Yes, you will find an immersive kingdom building from the start. A type of friendship that is forced at start but slowly developed or rather presented to you by me in future chapters. Comedy- I am not a comedian but if you can imagine what I can write, then you will laugh. Late Antagonist- You might be surprised but you won't find a definite antagonist right from the start. It might take some hundred chapters to reveal the main antagonist. Logic- For god sake, please understand I am writing a novel inside a room. So, my logic is completely flawed and has hundreds of loopholes. I write what makes the story better. And, it might not be the same for you. 2.5D characters- My characters aren't 3D, They work and think individually but in the end, they will do what the story wants them to do. So, if you find it 2D, then you are right. But, if you understand the character's personality, you will find it 3D. This is a long review and I won't write any more reviews for this book unless I change something. I will upload one chapter each day and might upload two if I get time to write. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And, if you are into Daul Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Buddhism, read this book. [Alert- For each supergift, I will upload a bonus chapter in less than two hours.]

3yr

I_Love_123
I_Love_123Lv2

I have to say. It is an awesome story to read and follow a journey of a liar who decided to save his village with the lie. Although cultivation seems old stuff, the elemental powers and internal energy makes the cultivation much more interesting and with the lot of stuffs like bloodlines, martial souls, elemental veins, there are whole bunch of different things to explore. But, the story makes them very irrelevant because of the world that is currently being fleshed out and the characters that feels kind a 2D but also 3D when you deeply understands their emotions. As author said in his review, they will do what the story wants them to do but they will also bring emotions in your heart. I love how different characters like Pu Zhen, Lee Family are getting set up for the future events. Unfortunately, I don't have enough coins to give a super gift otherwise I would've asked for bonus chapters. If this review helps you, then like it and also read free chapters at the very least to decide whether to continue reading or not.

3yr
Xersol
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I can smell it from a mile away, this book will become a masterpiece, just got to hope that the author doesn’t ruin it yet because that might make me drop the novel! 🍿🍿🍿

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BlackFlamer
BlackFlamerLv13

exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp. Exp amen

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Ultimate_Thanos
Ultimate_ThanosLv1

BESTTTTTTT NOVELLLL EVERYONE SHOULD READ THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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Gon121
Gon121Lv1

it was somewhat unique....rather than travelling alone in world while conquering the world he was doing it with his village...and DUAL CULTIVATION

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BloodyKing
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This is an interesting novel, I join the journey. Although it has some inconsistencies and errors, compared to other web novels here, it's still a gem.

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Evil_Paragon
Evil_ParagonLv11

It kind a feels off for giving this book five stars but except for the writing quality, I can't cut star from anything. Updates are pretty stable excluding one time when he got sick. Story development is going great with lots of world background slowly expanding and the new characters getting introduced. Give it a try and you will love it.

3yr
AkshatArpit
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I don't usually read these kinda novels but something about this novel made me read it. To be honest, I'm glad that I gave it a chance. Can't wait for more chapters! Keep up the good work.

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