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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor2yr
2022-01-24 23:57

Alright! I am finally writing a review after twenty chapters. So, what can you expect from this novel? A lot of grammatical mistakes A little of bit inconsistency that you will find if you read it deeply A main character who basically lies to the entire world Kingdom building- Yes, you will find an immersive kingdom building from the start. A type of friendship that is forced at start but slowly developed or rather presented to you by me in future chapters. Comedy- I am not a comedian but if you can imagine what I can write, then you will laugh. Late Antagonist- You might be surprised but you won't find a definite antagonist right from the start. It might take some hundred chapters to reveal the main antagonist. Logic- For god sake, please understand I am writing a novel inside a room. So, my logic is completely flawed and has hundreds of loopholes. I write what makes the story better. And, it might not be the same for you. 2.5D characters- My characters aren't 3D, They work and think individually but in the end, they will do what the story wants them to do. So, if you find it 2D, then you are right. But, if you understand the character's personality, you will find it 3D. This is a long review and I won't write any more reviews for this book unless I change something. I will upload one chapter each day and might upload two if I get time to write. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And, if you are into Daul Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Buddhism, read this book. [Alert- For each supergift, I will upload a bonus chapter in less than two hours.]

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Anji_King
Anji_KingLv3

The author lied that he would update everyday 1 chapter. Nice. Consistent with the MC

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Sorry about that! I just had Tooth Canal Treatment and due to the continuous pain, I can't focus on writing. But, I will do my best for consistent upload.

Anji_King:The author lied that he would update everyday 1 chapter. Nice. Consistent with the MC
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Anji_King
Anji_KingLv3

Darling...I was just joking. Take your time. I am even more inconsistant than you

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Sorry about that! I just had Tooth Canal Treatment and due to the continuous pain, I can't focus on writing. But, I will do my best for consistent upload.
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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

the title of the novel is very underwhelming

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Sorry about that! I just had Tooth Canal Treatment and due to the continuous pain, I can't focus on writing. But, I will do my best for consistent upload.
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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

is the novel good?

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Sorry about that! I just had Tooth Canal Treatment and due to the continuous pain, I can't focus on writing. But, I will do my best for consistent upload.
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

How about you read free chapters to give it a try?

MAIDENLESS:is the novel good?
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

the description is very confusing

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Sorry about that! I just had Tooth Canal Treatment and due to the continuous pain, I can't focus on writing. But, I will do my best for consistent upload.
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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

hmmmm okey

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:How about you read free chapters to give it a try?
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

The story is about a liar who wants to keep his village and his family safe but to do so, he is tasked with extraordinary power and his quest of turning his village into the top powerhouse starts with that task.

MAIDENLESS:the description is very confusing
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

no there are very few chapter, I read this when it has 100+ chapter

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:How about you read free chapters to give it a try?
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

okey

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:The story is about a liar who wants to keep his village and his family safe but to do so, he is tasked with extraordinary power and his quest of turning his village into the top powerhouse starts with that task.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Alright, but there won't be hundred free chapters. Hopefully, you will enjoy your reading time.

MAIDENLESS:no there are very few chapter, I read this when it has 100+ chapter
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

is the mc a villain?

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:The story is about a liar who wants to keep his village and his family safe but to do so, he is tasked with extraordinary power and his quest of turning his village into the top powerhouse starts with that task.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

No! And, I feel like you should read it now rather than waiting for hundred chapters. But, still, whatever suits you the best.

MAIDENLESS:is the mc a villain?
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

why is there a cultivation tag and a magic tag? will he travel to magic world?

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:No! And, I feel like you should read it now rather than waiting for hundred chapters. But, still, whatever suits you the best.
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

I think you should remove the magic tag when there is no magic involved in this novel

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:No! And, I feel like you should read it now rather than waiting for hundred chapters. But, still, whatever suits you the best.
MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

*if

MAIDENLESS:I think you should remove the magic tag when there is no magic involved in this novel
Mark_Libed_3265
Mark_Libed_3265Lv10

bro author said read the novel to understand 😕😕🙉

MAIDENLESS:*if
Just_Jackul
Just_JackulLv13

harem

Marplayon
MarplayonLv2

I just want to know if he is a dense protagonist or too shy... those types of novels stress me out [img=faceslap]

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