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2022-08-15 20:54

rare to find a fic like this good grammer and very intresting concept hope you stray away from the traditional yuri that every female mc fic takes hope to see more

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Story wise it's well written and technically sound. That said, I don't like it. It reads like one of those Harry Potter fics that just goes on and on about the abuse, misery and self hatred like the author gets off on writing it. It seems to encourage the trend that heroes and main characters can only come from the ranks of the heavily abused, and its simply not a good headspace to be in. The story is largely extreme drama that makes you wonder if this is by the same author of those Turkish dramas your mom likes to watch, it's just too much drama to be likable to me. The mc is also a reincarnate, but is too stupid to think of any get rich schemes when thrown back into time with the mind of a genius... Instead the reincarnation aspect only serves for the extra drama of being a boy reincarnated in a girls body and litterally nothing else. The reason I rated the fic so high was because I rated it for the criteria listed by webnovel to rate on, not my personal likes or dislikes of it. I was initially excited for a good super heroine fanfic, but ended up more surprised that the usual orphanage underage girls pimping, gang rapes and other clichés didn't take place with how far the drama clichés were going and piling up. Then again, I couldn't bring myself to read past chapter 4. It was too much of a drama, angst milk for me to enjoy reading. Life is bad enough. Why make it worse by submerging yourself into drama and angst in your spare moments as well? But that's just me, and why to be fair I didn't bring my opinions and thaughts into the rating itself, only in this text below it.

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