The last chapter I'll post HERE is CHAPTER 18. For those that want the rest of the chapters. Look for me as Lightblade23 on Scribblehub Archive of our own Fanfiction . net

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Ok hear me out here, this fanfic is well written, I admit, it has minimal spelling errors and the grammar is good, so that's always a plus.. but I just find it too depressing and miserable, I mean MC is an orphan, almost dies from bullying, gets abused by caretaker, shot at, more abuse, gets kicked out of orphanage, almost gets kidnapped and raped.. It's not a marvel fanfic anymore, it's a fanfic that's bloody part of the Saw franchise.. it's gotten to the point where MC is so abused and traumatised that, she's going to need at least 50 years to get over it and heal..

A truly amazing fic, and its only two chapters in. The author takes time to properly research Marvel and related things about the story, and that itself instantly makes the fic good because you can see how much effort the author puts in and it shows through the writing, such as researching psychological effects of some things, and incorporates it seamlessly into the story, Not a Mary Sue character, the MC has her own problems and that will be an integral part of her as a person, and we can see that clearly in the second chapter. I 100% recommend this as a read. The only word to describe this is Flawless. I just wish there was more chapters or frequent updates because it's JUST THAT GOOD.

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Story wise it's well written and technically sound. That said, I don't like it. It reads like one of those Harry Potter fics that just goes on and on about the abuse, misery and self hatred like the author gets off on writing it. It seems to encourage the trend that heroes and main characters can only come from the ranks of the heavily abused, and its simply not a good headspace to be in. The story is largely extreme drama that makes you wonder if this is by the same author of those Turkish dramas your mom likes to watch, it's just too much drama to be likable to me. The mc is also a reincarnate, but is too stupid to think of any get rich schemes when thrown back into time with the mind of a genius... Instead the reincarnation aspect only serves for the extra drama of being a boy reincarnated in a girls body and litterally nothing else. The reason I rated the fic so high was because I rated it for the criteria listed by webnovel to rate on, not my personal likes or dislikes of it. I was initially excited for a good super heroine fanfic, but ended up more surprised that the usual orphanage underage girls pimping, gang rapes and other clichés didn't take place with how far the drama clichés were going and piling up. Then again, I couldn't bring myself to read past chapter 4. It was too much of a drama, angst milk for me to enjoy reading. Life is bad enough. Why make it worse by submerging yourself into drama and angst in your spare moments as well? But that's just me, and why to be fair I didn't bring my opinions and thaughts into the rating itself, only in this text below it.

PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP. and if you do drop I will do something so unspeakably awful........ I don't know what it is yet. But It will be unspeakably awful

I admire this author a lot. His word count for each chapter is especially admirable. As someone whos been familiar with silk and the spider verse in general for years silk was honestly so surprising to see on here. The author did well to not only give background but to do research in order to fill out those little details. Instead of saying “She was carrying a college level text book. Probably related to engineering and physics.” he said something along the lines of “She was carrying a book on muons in an anti electron field.” Or something of the sort my memory is not to good. However that little detail really helped guve imagery. The authors reasearch into trauma response is honestly what puts him a cut above everyone on this site. They stated they wanted us to care about the MC from the start and I think that’s largely neglected on this site. An OP MC does not call for half assing your work and yhats what most people tend to do on this site.

This is truly an amazing story. My parts of the story so far have not been action at all. This shows that the author is a truly talented writer and the effort they put in shines greatly. We get consistent updates and consistent characters who don't have rapid changes. The story is slow paced and perfectly fleshes out the characters. They have their own problems they have to deal with and have REAL struggles in day to day life, this is NOT a Mary Sue story. We have only seen two proper action scenes as of chapter 7 and they were both really good. This is definitely the best marvel fic you can find, and one of if not THE best fic in this app even with its limited chapters. The author takes the time to respond to last chapters comments in the newest chapter and creates a real connection with the reader as they put in effort. Definitely read it, you won't regret it.

Love the amount of research that went into writing it. It has good writing cuality and good attention to detail. This deserves a 5 star If I have ever seen one (Made at chapter 8)