webnovel
WalterHeisenberg
WalterHeisenbergLv43yr
2022-02-12 13:40

Just started reading and this Is my opinion on it as I just finished V1. I am not a professional story reviewer so take this review with a grain of salt if you don’t like it 👍. 1.) Mc is a shameless prideful moron who boast every time with barely any character development. 2.) The foreshadows are not that hard to understand but it’s too easy to see where the direction of the story will go. 3.) Needs a wisdom or intelligence stat as the Mc really needs it, as I feel like all those lies and boasting are useless if you just cluelessly say it to everyone and then it backfires later on. 4.) I don’t recall why he is even shameless and prideful in the beginning, we just see him as some sort of a ‘Npc’ with a set emotion, temper, and personality in the beginning of the story. Basically a weirdo. 5.) System and story is basically just a weird and interesting one with the Mc who seems like he just got transmigrated started being calculative and shameless off the bat and later on kills without any remorse and side effects in his mentality as the author doesn’t tell us if he ever killed anyone in the past before or if his bloodline changed him. 6.) I’ll POSSIBLY change this review if it gets better or worse in the later chaps as I don’t trust the reviews in this website as a lot of them are just baseless 5 star spams and I don’t have a really positive view of this story.

Reincarnated As a Lunarian With Sign-İn System

ZhaoYuzheru
4.8
50 Chs

Liked by 19 people

LIKE
Replies2
ZhaoYuzheru
ZhaoYuzheruAuthor

1) He actually had a lot of character development. You will understand it more clearly when you compare how he lives now to his past self. 2)Okay, I guess. 3) He just uses his lies to farm relationships or gain benefits. He won't lie randomly to cause trouble for himself when there is no benefit. 4)That's because I wanted to reveal his personality slowly via events rather than revealing it all right off the bat, It's okay if you disliked it though. 5)His backstory will explain this one too. 6)Okay, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thx for reading this far and leaving a review.

3yr
9
MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

I just wanted to ask before reading but wont he be way too op? He is already a lunarian which were hailed as gods but now he also has a system?

ZhaoYuzheru:1) He actually had a lot of character development. You will understand it more clearly when you compare how he lives now to his past self. 2)Okay, I guess. 3) He just uses his lies to farm relationships or gain benefits. He won't lie randomly to cause trouble for himself when there is no benefit. 4)That's because I wanted to reveal his personality slowly via events rather than revealing it all right off the bat, It's okay if you disliked it though. 5)His backstory will explain this one too. 6)Okay, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thx for reading this far and leaving a review.
3yr
Other Reviews
Charaf
CharafLv5

I haven't laughed like this in a long time I almost choked 😂😂😂😂😂 the way he interact with main character is hilarious I hope you don't drop it I really love it

3yr

NhongBest
NhongBestLv1

really good now

3yr
sedat_pekmez
sedat_pekmezLv1

Very interesting so far. Maybe the pacing could be a little faster and there are typo errors but I like it. Kudos to author for not being afraid to mess with canon(I am bored from the stories where mc always follows canon), I am curious where this story will go.

3yr
Hardkel
HardkelLv4

Very good

3yr
laboonlaboon
laboonlaboonLv6

very good story ! The MC has an interesting personality[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] thanks author ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]more please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
Raizen22
Raizen22Lv11

Definitely an interesting story to keep an eye out for, and yea Abel is not perfect. He is calculating, uses lies to hia benefits along with canon knowledge and I as a reader am okay with that. Especially if it makes the story better. Could he have handled things better, yes. Could he have gotten quality crewmates and handled things better in east blue? Yes. But its the authors story and we are only along for the ride, 5 years before canon starts is a very long time and by the sounds of it Luffy is about 11 to 12. An already we can see ripples of his actions affecting the east blue. Keep up the good work. I personally would've added Alvida to the crew and had her as a quarter master. Worked her to the bone to lose the weight and train her beyond her limits. Making her 1000 times better than her canon counterpart. But again, that is what I would do, author has other ideas. I look forward to his choices and decisions. In a weird way he kinda reminds me of Tengen. Kinda. But anyway, I look forward to more of this story.

3yr
YummyNum
YummyNumLv3

Review for first 20 chapters: One of the strangest one piece fics I have ever read. MC is very unpredictable as he generally does whatever he wants. İt is an interesting read though, some chapters are hilarious. Mc gets strong fast but time passes slowly in the story. So far mc got like 3-4 times stronger in 4 days yet it took around 20 chapters. So it is not like a typical action-adventure fic as it has slice of life in it as well, even though it is not in the tags. Also canon... it is gone by now and I have no idea where this story will go.

3yr
Poseidon_1_
Poseidon_1_Lv14

This won’t be a hugeky comprehensive review. However the character is a unique person who personifies shamelessness allowing funny comedic moments. World Building=5 Stars because of One Piece. Chapter update stability could be better but the quality iS great. Writing quality is phenomonal. So far the story is progressing well, just author take youe time to plan things etc.

3yr
BeastMaster64
BeastMaster64Lv1

Very interesting so far and I'm excited to see where this story goes .

3yr
Related Stories

Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life. Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards. He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works! "I will save them all!" However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise. It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines? Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée. Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him. Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him. The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises. Something was wrong here! Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others... They like him! All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists. Grayfia even betrayed her husband. Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded. At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ... His inner voice! - The plot that has been changed by the MC: 1. To Love Ru: 95% 2. Highschool DxD: 83% 3. Seishun Buta Yarou: 82% 4. Oshi no Ko: 100% 5. Saekano: 98% 6. Oregairu: 93% 7. Shinmai Maou no Testament: 100% 8. Mieruko-chan: 99% 9. Trinity Seven: 70% 10. The Legendary Mechanic: 35% 11. Oresuki: 51% 12. Food Wars: 44% 13. Rent-A-Girlfriend: 61% 14. The World God Only Knows: 100% This is the plot change process of the latest chapter and will change as the story progresses. By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character. Oh and in chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem. - Get the latest chapters faster on my patreon. Support me on patreon to keep me motivated to write more chapters: www.patreon.com/DogLicker

DogLickerGods · Anime & Comics
4.7
652 Chs

Surprise! I've Transmigrated Again

I've transmigrated, and I've arrived in the KonoSuba world. MC: Whoa there, hang on a sec! Don't say anything yet, let me first trick this stupid goddess into giving me more abilities! Some time later (and some psychological abuse)… Aqua: Okay, you win! Pick your skills! And fast! MC: Alright, check this out! I'm snagging〚World Traveling〛and〚Analyze and Copy〛! Sweet deal, right? Hahaha, I'm gonna be unstoppable! ◈◈◈ This novel is a multi-anime crossover, including but not limited to: 《 KonoSuba 》《 Demon Slayer 》《 Danmachi 》《 Re:Zero 》《 Overlord 》and more! Raw: 没想到吧我又又又穿越了 or Surprise! I've Transmigrated Again Author: 狐狐狐狐狐涂 or Fox Fox Fox Fox Fox Paint Disclaimer: This is just a translation, with no intention to offend the original authors of the works nor the fanfic author. https://www.patreon.com/c/mrblackwing

MrBlackWing · Anime & Comics
4.3
254 Chs

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group

10 chapters / week This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. --- He had been reincarnated, he thought that he didn't cheat until suddenly he noticed someone invite him on a group chat. [Do you wish to join Dimensional Chat Group?] MC: "Accept!" --------------------------------------------- Cover not mine, it's from anime Yosuga no Sora --------------------------------------------- Grammar sometimes sucks but bear with it. https://discord.gg/Q3MFzds If you want to tell me there is a grammar mistake. --------------------------------------------- https://www.patreon.com/akikan40 Maybe I'll be full of energy to write your favorite fanfic.

akikan40 · Anime & Comics
4.6
2206 Chs

My Journey as Fourth Kazekage

An office worker is suddenly transmigrated into the body of Rasa, who has just been appointed as the Fourth Kazekage. With the looming threat of the Third Shinobi War and the dire state of his village, he seems like just another unfortunate soul destined to suffer. Wrong! "What the… I have a Karma Seal from Boruto? Isn’t that supposed to be a seed of some Otsutsuki dude? But whatever. Even if I don’t have an overpowered ability like the Sharingan, I still have this Karma Seal. All I have to do is use it to grow stronger and ensure my survival." From that moment on, the new Rasa begins plotting for the sake of his village while using his only cheat to become stronger. === English isn’t my first language, and I don’t own anything. Read advance chapters here: www.patreon.com/OberonLA

OberonLA · Anime & Comics
4.6
138 Chs
Login