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Raizen22
Raizen22Lv112yr
2022-01-11 03:44

Definitely an interesting story to keep an eye out for, and yea Abel is not perfect. He is calculating, uses lies to hia benefits along with canon knowledge and I as a reader am okay with that. Especially if it makes the story better. Could he have handled things better, yes. Could he have gotten quality crewmates and handled things better in east blue? Yes. But its the authors story and we are only along for the ride, 5 years before canon starts is a very long time and by the sounds of it Luffy is about 11 to 12. An already we can see ripples of his actions affecting the east blue. Keep up the good work. I personally would've added Alvida to the crew and had her as a quarter master. Worked her to the bone to lose the weight and train her beyond her limits. Making her 1000 times better than her canon counterpart. But again, that is what I would do, author has other ideas. I look forward to his choices and decisions. In a weird way he kinda reminds me of Tengen. Kinda. But anyway, I look forward to more of this story.

Reincarnated As a Lunarian With Sign-İn System

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Charaf
CharafLv5

I haven't laughed like this in a long time I almost choked 😂😂😂😂😂 the way he interact with main character is hilarious I hope you don't drop it I really love it

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WalterHeisenberg
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Just started reading and this Is my opinion on it as I just finished V1. I am not a professional story reviewer so take this review with a grain of salt if you don’t like it 👍. 1.) Mc is a shameless prideful moron who boast every time with barely any character development. 2.) The foreshadows are not that hard to understand but it’s too easy to see where the direction of the story will go. 3.) Needs a wisdom or intelligence stat as the Mc really needs it, as I feel like all those lies and boasting are useless if you just cluelessly say it to everyone and then it backfires later on. 4.) I don’t recall why he is even shameless and prideful in the beginning, we just see him as some sort of a ‘Npc’ with a set emotion, temper, and personality in the beginning of the story. Basically a weirdo. 5.) System and story is basically just a weird and interesting one with the Mc who seems like he just got transmigrated started being calculative and shameless off the bat and later on kills without any remorse and side effects in his mentality as the author doesn’t tell us if he ever killed anyone in the past before or if his bloodline changed him. 6.) I’ll POSSIBLY change this review if it gets better or worse in the later chaps as I don’t trust the reviews in this website as a lot of them are just baseless 5 star spams and I don’t have a really positive view of this story.

2yr
NhongBest
NhongBestLv1

really good now

2yr
sedat_pekmez
sedat_pekmezLv1

Very interesting so far. Maybe the pacing could be a little faster and there are typo errors but I like it. Kudos to author for not being afraid to mess with canon(I am bored from the stories where mc always follows canon), I am curious where this story will go.

2yr
Hardkel
HardkelLv4

Very good

2yr
laboonlaboon
laboonlaboonLv6

very good story ! The MC has an interesting personality[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] thanks author ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]more please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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YummyNum
YummyNumLv3

Review for first 20 chapters: One of the strangest one piece fics I have ever read. MC is very unpredictable as he generally does whatever he wants. İt is an interesting read though, some chapters are hilarious. Mc gets strong fast but time passes slowly in the story. So far mc got like 3-4 times stronger in 4 days yet it took around 20 chapters. So it is not like a typical action-adventure fic as it has slice of life in it as well, even though it is not in the tags. Also canon... it is gone by now and I have no idea where this story will go.

2yr
Poseidon_1_
Poseidon_1_Lv13

This won’t be a hugeky comprehensive review. However the character is a unique person who personifies shamelessness allowing funny comedic moments. World Building=5 Stars because of One Piece. Chapter update stability could be better but the quality iS great. Writing quality is phenomonal. So far the story is progressing well, just author take youe time to plan things etc.

2yr
BeastMaster64
BeastMaster64Lv1

Very interesting so far and I'm excited to see where this story goes .

2yr
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