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Ram800
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2024-07-31 06:54

Writing is amazing, and the world building is close to source material, but everything about the Mc it feels like all of he’s actions are pointless. Everything he does doesn’t feel like he’s but frosts and everyone else seems as if they gaining more from frosts orders towards him, he’s just a puppet with no goal of he’s own he’s hasn’t gained his own thoughts or a belief the only time I felt as if he’s his own person was in the limbo arc away from frost influence and so in end to me he’s no a Mc but person that’s easily replaced.

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