Ram800

Okay so this novel shows a very clear lack of flow. A couple of chapters in and everything just happens, a example is the very first chapter where he instantly forgets his old family and thinks of becoming the strongest. The reason is because he has memories of the body he possessed showing him to be in DxD. Another part that bothered me was the fact that he suddenly revealed critical info to jiraiya without proper reason of why he did that. I’m not sure whether or not the writing becomes better, but I do know is that the beginning wasn’t very good. So take how y’all want.

The funny thing about this is that amount of times I see translators get hate for not translating the names. Like I saw this one Genshin impact fanfic with a Chinese name and people complained for it to be changed. Things like this happens a lot.

Great story, nothing much to say other than the lack of updates.

Other than the translation which I find good, the story itself shows off a strong start of a average Chinese novel. The nationalism that it shows a measly two chapters in, or how the characters react by showing a attitude of superiority, is just isn’t for me.

Never played Genshin, but this is simple enough for me to read and understand what’s happening. It very good nothing much to criticize, the translation is amazing, the simulations are very interesting. Of course there are simulations that are little too much for me, a example is the Barbara one, but that’s about it there’s a couple more that were a little much, but it wasn’t enough for me to drop.

I been reading fanfics for about a week, since taking a break for a couple months, but this is the only one that made a laugh from BS.

This is for a Chinese fanfic is pretty good and the Mc is very enjoyable.

I was curious if I should know the original plot to enjoy this story, mind you I vaguely remember reading something with this title only it was a manhua.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter