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Leo_Bassist
Leo_BassistLv132yr
2022-01-22 12:59

I really like the MC personality. And the story and the world background is really familar. The system is good which is not to slave the MC But the downside is I don't know if author slowly nerfing the MC or just inconsistent power scaling? Mc at 6yrs old he is 2nd tier magician and shinobi(student) also received 30% madara jutsu, later on after 4 yrs MC(10yrs old) not only he didn't improve (still 2nd tier magician and shinobi[student chakra]) also he only learned 3 ninjutsu in all 4yrs??? He also a fast leaner but really opposite result. I don't know what kind of logic did the author use in this. Also author didn't really understand about jutsu and chakra, he clearly give a mistake about shadow clone justu which is b rank and author tag it an e-rank also about chakra.

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Dark_Crown98
4.2
71 Chs

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Dark_Crown98
Dark_Crown98Author

Bro, it was my mistake in power scaling.. There won't be such mistake from vol2

2yr
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YaGa
YaGaLv14

when is the next chapter coming out author san?

Dark_Crown98:Bro, it was my mistake in power scaling.. There won't be such mistake from vol2
2yr
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Dark_Crown98
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Not a 5 star worthy work, But still giving it... As, I own the work!! This FF is basically of a mysterious goddess sending our Mc into the world of Overlord/ New World, and him knowing the plot, he tries every means possible to defeat the Nazarick, with his Op system.. While Villain of many other dimension, helps him achieve his goal by giving him there abilities, the condition being only if he can entertain them enough. If you have any doubt, You can comment down..

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I like it author sama don't stop wroting like others would like more of this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Love this, The author has a new idea, of making a FF of Mc going against the Nazarick, There are some Update issue and some grammar mistake here and there, but all in all it is good!! ❤️❤️❤️😍😍

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HAREM!!! GIVE US A HAREM!!!!! WITH Female Villains like ESDEATH from Akame Ga Kill and Kaguya Otosouki from Naruto comeon comeon comeon comeon comeon comeon

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