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happy_sadLv133yr
2022-01-14 00:41

Its a interesting and new (at least to me) concept and it has a evil mc which i like but the grammar is pretty bad but i could get through it but im not going to because its annoying it has the basics capitalization and periods etc but doesn't use the right words or format to correctly form a sentence I already corrected 2 so if you want to check just check my profile I would give it a chance if you dont mind things like that and a little xianxia vibes

Villains Are My Sponsors!

Dark_Crown98
4.2
71 Chs

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Dark_Crown98
Dark_Crown98Author

My grammar, I am improving it with the further the story progresses, as I am not a pro Writer.. So, Only Time will improve me with grammar, So the more Chapter releases.. the better grammar quality you will receive. Thanks for your review

3yr
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happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

Np if you can use grammarly

Dark_Crown98:My grammar, I am improving it with the further the story progresses, as I am not a pro Writer.. So, Only Time will improve me with grammar, So the more Chapter releases.. the better grammar quality you will receive. Thanks for your review
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SR_2027
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Que: What would you expect from a good ff with villain MC? that too in Overlord universe? Ans: PERFECTION Writing quality: Good, no major mistakes, fun and easy to understand. Story development: What do think you will get in a ff with villain MC? Smart manipulative MC. Story starts off pretty akward with chilché trope but the idea is quite unique with unlimited potential. Character designs: Smart manipulative MC with brain. Although I don't like the first chapter, but other than that, it's almost perfect. The MC is like a cold manipulative person and plans out his things rather than let it on luck. Updating stability: Good. Regular updates. World background: What else do you want when you're in Overlord universe? OVERALL: One of the best Overlord Fanfic that I have read. Although it would be better if there are more chapters. Hope author continues this masterpiece.

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Dark_Crown98
Dark_Crown98Author

Not a 5 star worthy work, But still giving it... As, I own the work!! This FF is basically of a mysterious goddess sending our Mc into the world of Overlord/ New World, and him knowing the plot, he tries every means possible to defeat the Nazarick, with his Op system.. While Villain of many other dimension, helps him achieve his goal by giving him there abilities, the condition being only if he can entertain them enough. If you have any doubt, You can comment down..

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ThoTslayer_10l
ThoTslayer_10lLv4

I like it author sama don't stop wroting like others would like more of this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Rough_DoMainz
Rough_DoMainzLv2

Love this, The author has a new idea, of making a FF of Mc going against the Nazarick, There are some Update issue and some grammar mistake here and there, but all in all it is good!! ❤️❤️❤️😍😍

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Ramon69
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HAREM!!! GIVE US A HAREM!!!!! WITH Female Villains like ESDEATH from Akame Ga Kill and Kaguya Otosouki from Naruto comeon comeon comeon comeon comeon comeon

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Leo_Bassist
Leo_BassistLv13

I really like the MC personality. And the story and the world background is really familar. The system is good which is not to slave the MC But the downside is I don't know if author slowly nerfing the MC or just inconsistent power scaling? Mc at 6yrs old he is 2nd tier magician and shinobi(student) also received 30% madara jutsu, later on after 4 yrs MC(10yrs old) not only he didn't improve (still 2nd tier magician and shinobi[student chakra]) also he only learned 3 ninjutsu in all 4yrs??? He also a fast leaner but really opposite result. I don't know what kind of logic did the author use in this. Also author didn't really understand about jutsu and chakra, he clearly give a mistake about shadow clone justu which is b rank and author tag it an e-rank also about chakra.

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