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SR_2027Lv53yr
2022-01-13 00:34

Que: What would you expect from a good ff with villain MC? that too in Overlord universe? Ans: PERFECTION Writing quality: Good, no major mistakes, fun and easy to understand. Story development: What do think you will get in a ff with villain MC? Smart manipulative MC. Story starts off pretty akward with chilché trope but the idea is quite unique with unlimited potential. Character designs: Smart manipulative MC with brain. Although I don't like the first chapter, but other than that, it's almost perfect. The MC is like a cold manipulative person and plans out his things rather than let it on luck. Updating stability: Good. Regular updates. World background: What else do you want when you're in Overlord universe? OVERALL: One of the best Overlord Fanfic that I have read. Although it would be better if there are more chapters. Hope author continues this masterpiece.

Villains Are My Sponsors!

Dark_Crown98
4.2
71 Chs

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Dark_Crown98
Dark_Crown98Author

Thanks for your review, man🥰

3yr
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SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5

Have you ever read Chinese novels, specially those MTL? Now compared to those where you could not even read a whole paragraph, this is a lot better. Atleast you can read and correct the sentence by itself. And beleive me, I have read so many chinese novels/ffs that my mind had installed a autocorrect function, so for me, it's far more better to read. As for how he is mascot and wanted to be ra'ped by a pedo? I haven't read about it...

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3yr
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SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5

NP man, I love the idea! Hope you can continue the ff. 😁

Dark_Crown98:Thanks for your review, man🥰
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MIKMIK
MIKMIKLv5

pretty sure any who managed to read mtl fics will somehow gain a nerfed grammerly power

SR_2027:Have you ever read Chinese novels, specially those MTL? Now compared to those where you could not even read a whole paragraph, this is a lot better. Atleast you can read and correct the sentence by itself. And beleive me, I have read so many chinese novels/ffs that my mind had installed a autocorrect function, so for me, it's far more better to read. As for how he is mascot and wanted to be ra'ped by a pedo? I haven't read about it...
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3yr
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SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5

True...

MIKMIK:pretty sure any who managed to read mtl fics will somehow gain a nerfed grammerly power
3yr
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crusher
crusherLv5

SR_2027:True...
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SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5

crusher:
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Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv11

"Writing quality: Good, no major mistakes, fun and easy to understand" Bruh, I don´t know what you have been reading, but if you find no major mistakes in this FF then you should start reading other novels/FF and compare them. Yes, it is understandable and readable, but there is a mistake in almost every paragraph.

3yr
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crusher
crusherLv5

you are right about the automatic grammar correction. I was just thinking, I should be happy or sad about it.

SR_2027:
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crusher
crusherLv5

you are right about the automatic grammar correction. I was just thinking, I should be happy or sad about it.

SR_2027:
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Sooooyaaaaa
SooooyaaaaaLv4

can i have that meme pic?

3yr
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SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5

No

Sooooyaaaaa:can i have that meme pic?
3yr
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Dark_Crown98
Dark_Crown98Author

Not a 5 star worthy work, But still giving it... As, I own the work!! This FF is basically of a mysterious goddess sending our Mc into the world of Overlord/ New World, and him knowing the plot, he tries every means possible to defeat the Nazarick, with his Op system.. While Villain of many other dimension, helps him achieve his goal by giving him there abilities, the condition being only if he can entertain them enough. If you have any doubt, You can comment down..

3yr

ThoTslayer_10l
ThoTslayer_10lLv4

I like it author sama don't stop wroting like others would like more of this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
Rough_DoMainz
Rough_DoMainzLv2

Love this, The author has a new idea, of making a FF of Mc going against the Nazarick, There are some Update issue and some grammar mistake here and there, but all in all it is good!! ❤️❤️❤️😍😍

3yr
Ramon69
Ramon69Lv12

HAREM!!! GIVE US A HAREM!!!!! WITH Female Villains like ESDEATH from Akame Ga Kill and Kaguya Otosouki from Naruto comeon comeon comeon comeon comeon comeon

3yr
Leo_Bassist
Leo_BassistLv13

I really like the MC personality. And the story and the world background is really familar. The system is good which is not to slave the MC But the downside is I don't know if author slowly nerfing the MC or just inconsistent power scaling? Mc at 6yrs old he is 2nd tier magician and shinobi(student) also received 30% madara jutsu, later on after 4 yrs MC(10yrs old) not only he didn't improve (still 2nd tier magician and shinobi[student chakra]) also he only learned 3 ninjutsu in all 4yrs??? He also a fast leaner but really opposite result. I don't know what kind of logic did the author use in this. Also author didn't really understand about jutsu and chakra, he clearly give a mistake about shadow clone justu which is b rank and author tag it an e-rank also about chakra.

3yr
happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

Its a interesting and new (at least to me) concept and it has a evil mc which i like but the grammar is pretty bad but i could get through it but im not going to because its annoying it has the basics capitalization and periods etc but doesn't use the right words or format to correctly form a sentence I already corrected 2 so if you want to check just check my profile I would give it a chance if you dont mind things like that and a little xianxia vibes

3yr
Monarch_of_Time
Monarch_of_TimeLv4

..........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]..........[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].......[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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Lucifer951
Lucifer951Lv13

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WhyDo_I_StillExist
WhyDo_I_StillExistLv3

I like it, keep up the good work author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] always takes forever to post these reviews.

3yr
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