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RuberDFLv53yr
2022-01-08 16:08

The story is good, just hope at least you are going to finish a Nier Story. Almost every one is cursed to never be finished. . ...,.. ..........

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Azazyel
AzazyelAuthor

this is admittedly a side project to my other main story but I will do at least weekly updates though people may need to remind me honestly.

JeToNiX
JeToNiXLv5

SIDE PROJECT ARE U KIDDING ME ?!?, like a story this good is only a side project ?! I'm dumbfounded I can't believe this.....

Azazyel:this is admittedly a side project to my other main story but I will do at least weekly updates though people may need to remind me honestly.
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Yo, I have not read it all yet but are you going to do the thing where Nier is connected to Kingdom Hearts?

Azazyel:this is admittedly a side project to my other main story but I will do at least weekly updates though people may need to remind me honestly.
alam_Tya
alam_TyaLv2

There is nier automata fanfiction with decent mc (human) at least not the best but still i can say nice... The heroine of course A2 and White... But well kinda complicated romance relationship... I forgot The chapter is really long and the plot is really rollercoaster (atleast for me and i really enjoy it)... And y know what the story is finish and have epilogue chapter... Now if you want to know... It end with happy end because epilogue... And end bitter sweet without epilogue....

alam_Tya
alam_TyaLv2

For me it's one of the best nier automata fanfiction... The mc also know technology and know to make and repair machine, android etc...

alam_Tya:There is nier automata fanfiction with decent mc (human) at least not the best but still i can say nice... The heroine of course A2 and White... But well kinda complicated romance relationship... I forgot The chapter is really long and the plot is really rollercoaster (atleast for me and i really enjoy it)... And y know what the story is finish and have epilogue chapter... Now if you want to know... It end with happy end because epilogue... And end bitter sweet without epilogue....
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Magos_Dominus_8298
Magos_Dominus_8298Lv4

Author has lost his way Well this one is a bit difficult to write as I had good time with this novel, however itโ€™s time to address the elephant of the room. While the authorโ€™s approach to make fantasy words into more realistic is pretty neat thing same cannot be said about his charactersโ€ฆ While it is fairly explaining why androids act such excentric way towards the protagonist the same cannot be said about the later cast,- who were written in a way to lack personal interests and goals solely/mostly focusing on main character whith all essential parts of the relationships and character growth happening off-screen. Alot of good ideas but extreme mediocre execution - I think the perfect summary would be a cartoon box with a caption โ€žhere be dragonsโ€ which tries to predict that it will get good one day, but in the end is still just a cartoon cube. Most visible issue during later chapters is the pacing or lack of it. Main Protagonist can be presented with a problem with no good solution just to suddenly solve it off-screen or in a span of 2 pages without any sort test of wits and more like angry player complaining to developer to nerf the debuff. As I mentioned before most relationships are extremely fast paced well past the point of them feeling unnatural especially during the multiverse arc which requires it own separate section, believe that! Another big problem is the multiverse arcโ€ฆ yeahโ€ฆ that was bad. The multiverse addition clearly shows that author ran out of the ideas on how to solve the current MC issues so instead he added RWBY into the mix do that he can add more โ€žwaifusโ€. The way itโ€™s implemented lacks any sort of subtlely making novel lose it charms as it becomes yet another multiverse kingdom building webfic. Another thing is author critical errors in using characters introduced with multiverse, who often come as one dimensional, barely having any sort of opinion besides 2-4 selected topics and whatever MC thinks(although it might be an effect of my personal spite for whatever author did to Weiss character) I probably didnโ€™t say anything other than what other readers already said, good idea but terrible execution.

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