Love it GIve me more......................... On that note its already quite rare to find recent Nier Fanfics across the internet let alon in webnovel so the moment i saw this i clicked on it. and so far i wasnt dissapointed. not much to critique on aside from more chapters!!!!. but by far one of the best Nier Fanfics on this site. Keep Up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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The story is good, just hope at least you are going to finish a Nier Story. Almost every one is cursed to never be finished. . ...,.. ..........

the whole story is shet. mc is a degenerate, issei like pervert, that uses the androids programming juat to have sx with them. Useless, idiotuc, disgusting. + its harem, so i was never going to givw it a better than 1 star review.

Keep going your doing a great job. Also will he live longer since he has an acellerated healing factor. Like wolverine and dead pool. And like the omakes will he go to different worlds to get more powerful or just terror form the one he's in now. It would be cool if he got the advanced technology of other worlds and brought it to his own like krytonians cloning methods or rick and mortys inventions just popping up randomly.

very good and enjoyable fic, I like it and want more of it. ..........................................................................................

This Is awesome😀😀😀i hope you keep it up with the other story because nier automata fanfics are nearly zero😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Author has lost his way Well this one is a bit difficult to write as I had good time with this novel, however it’s time to address the elephant of the room. While the author’s approach to make fantasy words into more realistic is pretty neat thing same cannot be said about his characters… While it is fairly explaining why androids act such excentric way towards the protagonist the same cannot be said about the later cast,- who were written in a way to lack personal interests and goals solely/mostly focusing on main character whith all essential parts of the relationships and character growth happening off-screen. Alot of good ideas but extreme mediocre execution - I think the perfect summary would be a cartoon box with a caption „here be dragons” which tries to predict that it will get good one day, but in the end is still just a cartoon cube. Most visible issue during later chapters is the pacing or lack of it. Main Protagonist can be presented with a problem with no good solution just to suddenly solve it off-screen or in a span of 2 pages without any sort test of wits and more like angry player complaining to developer to nerf the debuff. As I mentioned before most relationships are extremely fast paced well past the point of them feeling unnatural especially during the multiverse arc which requires it own separate section, believe that! Another big problem is the multiverse arc… yeah… that was bad. The multiverse addition clearly shows that author ran out of the ideas on how to solve the current MC issues so instead he added RWBY into the mix do that he can add more „waifus”. The way it’s implemented lacks any sort of subtlely making novel lose it charms as it becomes yet another multiverse kingdom building webfic. Another thing is author critical errors in using characters introduced with multiverse, who often come as one dimensional, barely having any sort of opinion besides 2-4 selected topics and whatever MC thinks(although it might be an effect of my personal spite for whatever author did to Weiss character) I probably didn’t say anything other than what other readers already said, good idea but terrible execution.

the writer is a professional, he/she know how to write, But if you expect it to be Nier only, better stay away, i am fine with a perverted mc, but honestly i think mc is too much perverted,he literally only see android as a play thing rather than a life partner to me. At least thats what it seems to me