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Ornoth
OrnothLv131yr
2023-03-09 04:23

This story is giving me a stroke. It's really punishing to read. And the story! Well, it's just plain horrible. 100+ chapters in and it's only 3-4 days in the story. Lots of things happened in this 100 chapters, so many info dumps, so many events and so many women that I barely remember them at all. I stopped reading for a day and I barely remember what happened in this novel. Sayonara. I highly advise the author to use Grammarly, very useful for non-English speakers.

Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.

ForManaga
3.8
349 Chs

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ForManaga
ForManagaAuthor

Why not? Why not i as the author shamelessly leave 5 star review on my novel.

1yr

Lol1san
Lol1sanLv1

I really couldn't stand reading this sheet. The author confused being a villain with being dishonorable and spineless. Mc migrates to a world dominated by women and is supposedly the 'villain'. Once he gets the system, he acts extremely spineless and without dignity. The way he uses the system and his pacifist attitude is so disgusting that it made me want to vomit while reading. He doesn't want to get involved with the so-called pratogonist, he wants a technically peaceful life. And in order to protect this so-called peaceful and valuable life, he doesn't hesitate to act like a woman. It's frankly amazing that a person who has lived as a man for years in the world can be so transgender. The original pratogonist (that universe) is more of a man. In short, if you like reading about a spineless, cowardly, peaceful and feminine (acting) Mc, you might love this novel. For me it was just disgusting and annoying.

1yr
origin_seth
origin_sethLv4

*This just my initial review* okay Mr. Author.. the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good.. but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter. conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read. example of conversations.. MC: "Hello there" *Explanations of something useless or irrelevant* Girl: "hey, how're you" *inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations* that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro.. if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less.. this is just my opinions. because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same. i dont know, thanks.

1yr
Lord_Luzifer_
Lord_Luzifer_Lv14

The idea is nice but unfortunately it feels like you are reading the essay of a grade school kid. The grammar is … well non existent.

1yr
ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

The author is the real villain. He misleads his readers into thinking this mc has some sort of guts to him. No! He is a worthless beta male cuck. If this is the way the author describes a villain I'd like to see the author in real life bringing in some juice for her wife's kids and her boyfriend before sending them to off a seventh honeymoon while he takes care of the kids.

1yr
Daoistk5491d
Daoistk5491dLv1

The amount of people reading this Trash is frightening

1yr
hasnat_jamil
hasnat_jamilLv1

Gave it 1 star as it is the lowest possible ranking. I think even a robot would be better suited to write a story better than this trash. This novel is written by a guy with the imagination of a child and clearly a virgin. I had to reread some the chapters of Shadow Slave just to wash my eyes of this trash. Webnovel should really have a board of reviewers to sort through these kind of abominations. Not everyone can be a writer and neither should they allowed to be one.

1yr
Mr_Knight
Mr_KnightLv4

Author writing quality is low, too much explaining with next to little happen in one chapter, grammar is bad even basic he/she often wrong, the character actually should have interesting personality but the way Author written it still seems bland like reading diary, this novel got lucky with concept and trend

1yr
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

typical Chinese story, well if you don't count the protagonist's lack of pride and how he prefers to be the girl in the relationship You also have to unlock it from chapter 17 not recommended, just a loss

1yr
ToastedBoat
ToastedBoatLv3

Same old chinese urban novel that you've probably read a million times before..........................................................................

1yr
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