*This just my initial review* okay Mr. Author.. the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good.. but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter. conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read. example of conversations.. MC: "Hello there" *Explanations of something useless or irrelevant* Girl: "hey, how're you" *inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations* that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro.. if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less.. this is just my opinions. because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same. i dont know, thanks.
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true, the paid chapters started too early and filled with unnecessary monologues & explanations. There are chapters where almost no conversation happen. Seems like the author likes lazy money
i cant say i disagree.. but as readers we respect the writter. which we should feel satisfied with their works. the problem is, this type of writting style is trend right now. like, for example: a scene that 10 minute take all the whole chapter with unnecessary inner monologue that irrelevant with topic mc have. it feels like time is stopped with those info dump and monologoue. then again, not all going bad, This will show us readers,How Author can entertaint us. because IF they make mistake, it would be fatal. im not say this style is wrong, but.. just feel cheated. anyway, the story is decent for me. i would recommended waiting for read this, until you can unlock chapter via free-way. it is good to past time.
Venerable_White57:true, the paid chapters started too early and filled with unnecessary monologues & explanations. There are chapters where almost no conversation happen. Seems like the author likes lazy money
Finally someone came up with a good and genuine criticism.
Thank you, i do my best to explain, my english is,well,not so good. it is still good read, even though with annoying style. author take criticism with open hand. and thats got respect from me. have a nice day brother..
StumblingtoSuccess:Finally someone came up with a good and genuine criticism.
Yea, I also some issue with english despite being an author myself and I do know you like his work. I know Managa and he will take anything openly.
origin_seth:Thank you, i do my best to explain, my english is,well,not so good. it is still good read, even though with annoying style. author take criticism with open hand. and thats got respect from me. have a nice day brother..
oohh !? let me put your work in library.. gonna check yours after finish my list first. Have a good day.
StumblingtoSuccess:Yea, I also some issue with english despite being an author myself and I do know you like his work. I know Managa and he will take anything openly.
Thnx but I know u won't like my stories. They are trashy.
origin_seth:oohh !? let me put your work in library.. gonna check yours after finish my list first. Have a good day.
well, i wouldnt know that trashy or not. need to read first. after reading, i would know either its good or not. fair ?
StumblingtoSuccess:Thnx but I know u won't like my stories. They are trashy.
Fair
origin_seth:well, i wouldnt know that trashy or not. need to read first. after reading, i would know either its good or not. fair ?
You feel cheated because that the whole point of the writing style. Its to place unnecessary filler so they can extens the chapters/story and make more money by spreading 1 chapter thin until it becomes 5 chapters
origin_seth:i cant say i disagree.. but as readers we respect the writter. which we should feel satisfied with their works. the problem is, this type of writting style is trend right now. like, for example: a scene that 10 minute take all the whole chapter with unnecessary inner monologue that irrelevant with topic mc have. it feels like time is stopped with those info dump and monologoue. then again, not all going bad, This will show us readers,How Author can entertaint us. because IF they make mistake, it would be fatal. im not say this style is wrong, but.. just feel cheated. anyway, the story is decent for me. i would recommended waiting for read this, until you can unlock chapter via free-way. it is good to past time.
I like how this exactly Dragon ball Z Super saiyan transformation in the og anime. vs Freeza, Majin Bu, Androids, Perfect Cell, Kid Bu n all that. one dude be loading his Kamehameha for 20 episodes, 15 episodes of cooldown to use bloodline skills to load energy for transform into super Saiyan skill only to load a spiritbomb for half a season or something, Die for 30 episodes, spend 10 episode's worth of pay to win currency to pay for access to a private road coming back to life, only to spend 18 pisodes worth of APE Crypto watching his son be the first Saiyan to understand the patch notes called super saiyan 2 exists on the *new* Be Cool AF DLC installment, then Kamehameha badly for 8 episodes before goku helping his son Kamehameha for 6 more episode, before coming back from the grave... Rinse and repeat.
origin_seth:i cant say i disagree.. but as readers we respect the writter. which we should feel satisfied with their works. the problem is, this type of writting style is trend right now. like, for example: a scene that 10 minute take all the whole chapter with unnecessary inner monologue that irrelevant with topic mc have. it feels like time is stopped with those info dump and monologoue. then again, not all going bad, This will show us readers,How Author can entertaint us. because IF they make mistake, it would be fatal. im not say this style is wrong, but.. just feel cheated. anyway, the story is decent for me. i would recommended waiting for read this, until you can unlock chapter via free-way. it is good to past time.
at least that is Anime or Manga,right? there some entertainment to watch and read manga/comic. not gonna be some boring back and forth. and this is novel, doesnt have 'something' to entertaints us, we,as readers, use imaginations and descriptions to imagine what whats going on. thats why i dont say this wrtting style is wrong, Authors just have to compensated with longer words. but the problems is, shorter chapters and broken conversations is not good.for me...
Zayah:I like how this exactly Dragon ball Z Super saiyan transformation in the og anime. vs Freeza, Majin Bu, Androids, Perfect Cell, Kid Bu n all that. one dude be loading his Kamehameha for 20 episodes, 15 episodes of cooldown to use bloodline skills to load energy for transform into super Saiyan skill only to load a spiritbomb for half a season or something, Die for 30 episodes, spend 10 episode's worth of pay to win currency to pay for access to a private road coming back to life, only to spend 18 pisodes worth of APE Crypto watching his son be the first Saiyan to understand the patch notes called super saiyan 2 exists on the *new* Be Cool AF DLC installment, then Kamehameha badly for 8 episodes before goku helping his son Kamehameha for 6 more episode, before coming back from the grave... Rinse and repeat.
yes I also hate authors who put unnecessary & long inner thoughts in to the story just to make it boring
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if you dint notice almost all chinese novel are just copy paste one after another, same chlice , almost nothing new no creativity, just copy paste and reskin,thats why lots off people dont like chinese author/novel,only chinese reader like chinese novel,
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hey, how to update my stars ? gonna give more stars
my 10 minutes scene will not take a whole chapter, trust me! Seth
origin_seth:i cant say i disagree.. but as readers we respect the writter. which we should feel satisfied with their works. the problem is, this type of writting style is trend right now. like, for example: a scene that 10 minute take all the whole chapter with unnecessary inner monologue that irrelevant with topic mc have. it feels like time is stopped with those info dump and monologoue. then again, not all going bad, This will show us readers,How Author can entertaint us. because IF they make mistake, it would be fatal. im not say this style is wrong, but.. just feel cheated. anyway, the story is decent for me. i would recommended waiting for read this, until you can unlock chapter via free-way. it is good to past time.
will this novel will not release new chapter
will this novel will not release new chapter
