Item: Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
Rating: 2
Author: Mr_Knight

Mr_KnightLv42yr

2023-01-13 22:06

Author writing quality is low, too much explaining with next to little happen in one chapter, grammar is bad even basic he/she often wrong, the character actually should have interesting personality but the way Author written it still seems bland like reading diary, this novel got lucky with concept and trend

Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.

ForManaga

3.8

371 Chs

Liked by 16 people

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ForManagaAuthor

Is this one you are talking about? It's not deleted bro.

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ForManagaAuthor

Why not? Why not i as the author shamelessly leave 5 star review on my novel.

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Lol1sanLv1

I really couldn't stand reading this sheet. The author confused being a villain with being dishonorable and spineless. Mc migrates to a world dominated by women and is supposedly the 'villain'. Once he gets the system, he acts extremely spineless and without dignity. The way he uses the system and his pacifist attitude is so disgusting that it made me want to vomit while reading. He doesn't want to get involved with the so-called pratogonist, he wants a technically peaceful life. And in order to protect this so-called peaceful and valuable life, he doesn't hesitate to act like a woman. It's frankly amazing that a person who has lived as a man for years in the world can be so transgender. The original pratogonist (that universe) is more of a man. In short, if you like reading about a spineless, cowardly, peaceful and feminine (acting) Mc, you might love this novel. For me it was just disgusting and annoying.

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origin_sethLv4

*This just my initial review* okay Mr. Author.. the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good.. but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter. conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read. example of conversations.. MC: "Hello there" *Explanations of something useless or irrelevant* Girl: "hey, how're you" *inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations* that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro.. if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less.. this is just my opinions. because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same. i dont know, thanks.

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Lord_Luzifer_Lv14

The idea is nice but unfortunately it feels like you are reading the essay of a grade school kid. The grammar is … well non existent.

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ChangedReviewerLv4

The author is the real villain. He misleads his readers into thinking this mc has some sort of guts to him. No! He is a worthless beta male cuck. If this is the way the author describes a villain I'd like to see the author in real life bringing in some juice for her wife's kids and her boyfriend before sending them to off a seventh honeymoon while he takes care of the kids.

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Daoistk5491dLv1

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hasnat_jamilLv1

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