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little_howiiLv22yr
2022-04-12 07:27

The story gets better the more chapters you read but there were some cringe worthy moments when he interacted with his love interests. Though the story is developing well and moving along. Keep writing

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ashes_Author

can you tell me what were some of the cringe worthy movement? and perhaps give me some advice as to how I can make it less cringey? because if I tone it down the character become bland and if I take it up a knotch... it becomes much...

ashes_Author

thanks a lot for your advice man... This is my first fanfic so any advice helps a lot Your reply was deleted by WN for some reason but luckily it's still available in my records... Thanks a lot once again. I'll try my best😊

ChillnurLv3

his comment was deleted maybe because he included a link in the comment. WN is getting more and more greedy

ashes_:thanks a lot for your advice man... This is my first fanfic so any advice helps a lot Your reply was deleted by WN for some reason but luckily it's still available in my records... Thanks a lot once again. I'll try my best😊
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