Bruh r u fking kidding me bruv he literally change nothing. NOTHING. Y are u even writing this fanfic, if u had the idea of showing a taking cat/bird/bear y r u even in marvel make a normal novel.
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i though it was clear that I wasn't going to change things in the beginning of this fanfic, and I don't plan to. this is my first ff and honestly I was debating whether I should make changes like saving iron man, because it iron man lived, along of think could have changed, like spiderman far from home, it literally wouldn't have happened and neither would no way home, in fact I am planning on sending rala to a whole different universe. what I am trying to say is that this is my first ff or ever writing anything for that matter and as a new Arthur changing a plot this big would affect my original goal which is yo gain enough experience to start my own novel. I get what you are saying, an annomyly like rala should change thinks, but I would have to find replacement for I am currently unable to. which lead to me dropping this ff and getting nothing in return (experience ). so yeah I get your point and sorry if you were looking for crazy plot twist, the only twist I have is the fact that rala is one of the many parallel minds of certain reincationated individual.
Ah my bad im sry i didnt read the synopsis. Clearly my fault
Rala_Beast:i though it was clear that I wasn't going to change things in the beginning of this fanfic, and I don't plan to. this is my first ff and honestly I was debating whether I should make changes like saving iron man, because it iron man lived, along of think could have changed, like spiderman far from home, it literally wouldn't have happened and neither would no way home, in fact I am planning on sending rala to a whole different universe. what I am trying to say is that this is my first ff or ever writing anything for that matter and as a new Arthur changing a plot this big would affect my original goal which is yo gain enough experience to start my own novel. I get what you are saying, an annomyly like rala should change thinks, but I would have to find replacement for I am currently unable to. which lead to me dropping this ff and getting nothing in return (experience ). so yeah I get your point and sorry if you were looking for crazy plot twist, the only twist I have is the fact that rala is one of the many parallel minds of certain reincationated individual.
no it's actually fine. I notice the issue with this ff. 1.there aren't that much interaction between the mc and other characters. 2.other pov, I didn't do other people pov, like the public and the heroes but I am working on that. don't worry it will get better, I hope.
getfukked:Ah my bad im sry i didnt read the synopsis. Clearly my fault
Look forward to future ff
Rala_Beast:no it's actually fine. I notice the issue with this ff. 1.there aren't that much interaction between the mc and other characters. 2.other pov, I didn't do other people pov, like the public and the heroes but I am working on that. don't worry it will get better, I hope.
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Rala_Beast:no it's actually fine. I notice the issue with this ff. 1.there aren't that much interaction between the mc and other characters. 2.other pov, I didn't do other people pov, like the public and the heroes but I am working on that. don't worry it will get better, I hope.
BUT how you are going to gain 'experience' if you dont change anything? you are basically doing ctrl c ctrl v. Theres no experience to gain on that.
Rala_Beast:i though it was clear that I wasn't going to change things in the beginning of this fanfic, and I don't plan to. this is my first ff and honestly I was debating whether I should make changes like saving iron man, because it iron man lived, along of think could have changed, like spiderman far from home, it literally wouldn't have happened and neither would no way home, in fact I am planning on sending rala to a whole different universe. what I am trying to say is that this is my first ff or ever writing anything for that matter and as a new Arthur changing a plot this big would affect my original goal which is yo gain enough experience to start my own novel. I get what you are saying, an annomyly like rala should change thinks, but I would have to find replacement for I am currently unable to. which lead to me dropping this ff and getting nothing in return (experience ). so yeah I get your point and sorry if you were looking for crazy plot twist, the only twist I have is the fact that rala is one of the many parallel minds of certain reincationated individual.
I was talking about changing major think, I am not going to follow the MCU timeline word for word, there are going to be changes, i mean his presence alone causes the timeline to shift but what I am talking about are like the think that even the timeline keepers( I don't remember their the ata) to pay attention to him. since he is a nexus being. I also get what you are saying and there is definitely going to be some changes, but keep in mind there is someone keeping taps on him
PsyLoRD:BUT how you are going to gain 'experience' if you dont change anything? you are basically doing ctrl c ctrl v. Theres no experience to gain on that.
Is it really that hard to type of full words?. I mean did you truly save time by shortening You or are?
