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DareMeNot
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2022-07-14 07:59

Why doesnt this fix have a ranking yet? It's clearly better than the rest of the marvel fic that I have read in this platform... But yeah, needs quite a bit of editing. But anyway, nice work bro...馃憣馃榿馃榿馃憣馃憤

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Zekril
ZekrilLv4

Yes its good but the problem is since the event is similar to the original where the mc is passive just like the rest it dont have much expectations to gather so readers just read it and go. No stone because the writer made this for fun not for rank.

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