webnovel
Friendlyauthor121
Friendlyauthor121Lv23yr
2022-01-01 16:45

I have read two chapters and very excited to give review this novel is fab,it was like all things are running like any film in front of my eyes I won't say anything about grammar because mine is also not so good Keep writing author...[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
GoGo
GoGoAuthor

Hello! The Author of this novel is here. I am rewriting the details here as the last time was written on android and I can't type on it properly. The MC here is not super smart, super strong, super manipulative, or good at virtually everything. He is just an average person who knows how to use common sense and like in life, he experiences failures a lot. But life is about growing and evolving and our MC will do just that. All his bad experiences will make him stronger, all his losses give him more experience and he will grow up to be a monster later. There are also lots of side characters in this novel as MC is not a one-man army, he will slowly create a group of his own because a single person can't do everything on his own. And none of these members are those that worship MC even with his knowledge, instead, they all are part of his group for their reasons. About the story: ARC1 - Mostly introduction and how the world got affected by players and introduction of the organization that will play a part in the power struggle in the future, nothing important besides some introductions. ARC2 - This happened between the five-year interval players disappear for and will have the most growth on MC's front. This arc will tell the tale about MC finding that the world may not be the same as he remembered and some changes have taken place. ARC3 - This will be the player's arrival and probably the arc where MC will leave his base planet and meet the other characters[native/npcs] from other starter planets whose story we have been following since ARC1. And not all of them may be friendly. ARC4 - TBD Just read it guy/buddy/fweand So just some details about the world. The world is divided into three newbie planets each with its Power system. Planet of Prenia is the knight and magic planet. There are two unique paths in this, The knight path which gives you power similar to dragon ball z characters, and the classic magic system. Planet of Taurus is the mutant and externalist planet. There are two unique paths on this one too. The mutant power system uses biomass and genetic mutations to exceed their life limits and reach transcendence while the Externalist uses tools, mech, and advanced weaponry to fight. Planet of Danav is the beast planet. There is only one unique power system on this planet and it's called Shaman or totem warriors. These warriors can control the beast, use beast spirit to enhance themselves, create totems, etc. Besides these 5 power systems, there is a sixth one common on all the planets. And it's called Domain and has a different name on all the planets. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Ayanko_Chan
Ayanko_ChanLv1
Related Stories

Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest

What do the words Third-Rate Villain mean? Doesn't every human being possess their own background story? Just because a game hadn't explored one's background story, does it mean those characters are irrelevant? In a world where video games come to life, Astron Natusalune is introduced as a seemingly insignificant character—a third-rate villain with a minor role. However, this ordinary facade belies a haunting past that has shaped Astron into the vengeful soul he has become. Someone who would do everything for his vengeance. What will occur if Astron's soul combines with one from Earth? Will he relinquish his position as a third-rate villain, or will he forge a new path? Driven by a singular purpose—to avenge his sister's tragic death and bring justice to a cruel world—Astron embarks on a transformative journey. Witness the journey of the Astron as the young boy experiences a profound shift in his own values as he witnesses firsthand the consequences of unchecked vengeance and the true complexities of morality. -----------------------------------0------------------------------------ Chapter length 1750-2500 At least one chapter a day. You can check my discord if you want. You will be able to see the illustrations here and engage in a conversation with me if I am available. https://discord.gg/qRknX5hTur ---------------------------0------------------------------ Business E-mail: yusuftalhayasar@outlook.com Discord: _yty_

Darkness_Enjoyer · Fantasy
4.3
1030 Chs

The Runic Alchemist

Ben, a postgraduate chemistry student, envisions a future where science unlocks the secrets of the universe. But fate has other plans. In a sudden twist, Ben dies and awakens in a strange new world, reborn as a five-year-old boy named Damian Sunblade. Damian's joy at being part of a noble family is short-lived. His family, valuing gold over blood, sells him off to another noble house to be groomed as a homemaker husband, a mere pawn in their political games. Struggling with his new reality and the remnants of his past life’s knowledge, Damian refuses to succumb to his fate. In his new household, Damian discovers that this world is governed by magic circles, Runic symbols wielding immense power. Driven by his scientific curiosity, Damian begins to experiment. Applying the laws of physics to the Rune symbols, he deciphers their secrets and invents his own unique form of magic. However, The family that bought him has their own plans for him, seeing Damian as a valuable tool to enhance their power. But Damian, ever the independent spirit, has dreams beyond servitude. He longs for freedom, a place to call his own—a life where he can use his talents without restraint. And so Damian devises a daring plan to escape. His journey is fraught with danger and intrigue, as he navigates a world filled with mystical creatures, powerful adversaries, and ancient secrets. Along the way, he forges alliances and battles enemies, all while refining his magical and scientific skills. In "The Runic Alchemist," follow Damian Sunblade’s epic quest for independence and self-discovery. Witness his transformation from a forsaken child to a formidable Alchemist, determined to carve out an extraordinary future for himself in a world teeming with infinite possibilities. ***** Author Note : Hello! GlaringError here! As I have already mentioned in my author review I am restating it here since I am getting tons of comments about it, that I am more of a reader myself than a writer, I made this novel in an attempt to capture my fantasy world residing in my mind into words.. Writing is new for me.. The premise of my novel is inspired by many great works that I have loved over the years. And some elements I have in my novel that are slightly similar to them but it's just the skeleton of it, the real meat of the plot is entirely my own cooking. Some of the influence that is more noticeable is from The Runesmith (By Kuropon), The King's Avatar (By Butterfly Blue) and Shadow Slave (By Guiltythree). I have immense respect for these legends and I can only hope to follow in their footsteps. To all those who comment just by judging the name, at least give it a chance before letting your opinions be known. Thank you.

GlaringError · Fantasy
4.3
616 Chs